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By *icketysplits OP   Woman
over a year ago

Way over Yonder, that's where I'm bound

I'm stuck. I can't get my writing finished until I have a good first line.

Any suggestions? Any classic first lines that I can plagerise?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

wots does it have to encompass?

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By *iamondsmiles.Woman
over a year ago

little house on the praire

Once upon a time

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By *ittle_brat_evie!!Woman
over a year ago

evesham

once upon a time....

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

we shall shag them on the beaches, we shall shag them on the...

try that

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By *icketysplits OP   Woman
over a year ago

Way over Yonder, that's where I'm bound


"wots does it have to encompass? "

Fear of change and seeing a task through to the finish (I know...!)

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By *ezebelWoman
over a year ago

North of The Wall - youll need your vest


"I'm stuck. I can't get my writing finished until I have a good first line.

Any suggestions? Any classic first lines that I can plagerise?"

Wanna fuck?

Ahhhh maybe you dont mean messages...

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By *icketysplits OP   Woman
over a year ago

Way over Yonder, that's where I'm bound


"Once upon a time"

I've already used that one. I've also used are you sitting comfortably? then I'll begin.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

It was the darkest of times?

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By *icketysplits OP   Woman
over a year ago

Way over Yonder, that's where I'm bound


"we shall shag them on the beaches, we shall shag them on the...

try that"

I didn't recognise you there. New haircut?

I may have to substitute shag for another word...

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By *icketysplits OP   Woman
over a year ago

Way over Yonder, that's where I'm bound


"It was the darkest of times? "

That might work...

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By (user no longer on site)
Forum Mod
over a year ago

Do the writing and then read it back to create a perfect and fitting first line afterwards

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"It was the darkest of times?

That might work..."

Followed by something to do with, but light at the end of the tunnel, so to speak

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By *emmefataleWoman
over a year ago

dirtybigbadsgirlville

It is a truth universally acknowledged, that a single man in possession of a good fortune, must be in want of a wife.

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By *icketysplits OP   Woman
over a year ago

Way over Yonder, that's where I'm bound


"Do the writing and then read it back to create a perfect and fitting first line afterwards"

That doesn't work for me - unless it's a long report. It's all there waiting to hit the page if I could just get the tone. It may be a first thing in the morning task as I will dream the first line.

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By *icketysplits OP   Woman
over a year ago

Way over Yonder, that's where I'm bound


"It is a truth universally acknowledged, that a single man in possession of a good fortune, must be in want of a wife. "

My favourite book of all time. This has started a little worm of a thought. Thank you.

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By *arambarMan
over a year ago

swindon

Choose Life. Choose a job. Choose a career. Choose a family. Choose a fucking big television, choose washing machines, cars, compact disc players and electrical tin openers. Choose good health, low cholesterol, and dental insurance. Choose fixed interest mortgage repayments. Choose a starter home. Choose your friends. Choose leisurewear and matching luggage. Choose a three-piece suit on hire purchase in a range of fucking fabrics. Choose DIY and wondering who the fuck you are on Sunday morning. Choose sitting on that couch watching mind-numbing, spirit-crushing game shows, stuffing fucking junk food into your mouth. Choose rotting away at the end of it all, pissing your last in a miserable home, nothing more than an embarrassment to the selfish, fucked up brats you spawned to replace yourselves. Choose your future. Choose life...

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By *emmefataleWoman
over a year ago

dirtybigbadsgirlville


"It is a truth universally acknowledged, that a single man in possession of a good fortune, must be in want of a wife.

My favourite book of all time. This has started a little worm of a thought. Thank you."
In my top ten but a great first line...good luck x

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By *icketysplits OP   Woman
over a year ago

Way over Yonder, that's where I'm bound


"It was the darkest of times?

That might work...

Followed by something to do with, but light at the end of the tunnel, so to speak "

The transition tunnel... I'll have to get you all just to write my stuff for me. One line each.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Are you writing profiles ?

If it's for a single bloke you could try 'Once upon a time ....'

If it's for a MF couple you could try 'I command thee .....'

If it's for a single female, meh, why bother ? Just flop ur waps out !

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"wots does it have to encompass?

Fear of change and seeing a task through to the finish (I know...!)"

It was a very dark nite ...........

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By *icketysplits OP   Woman
over a year ago

Way over Yonder, that's where I'm bound


"Are you writing profiles ?

If it's for a single bloke you could try 'Once upon a time ....'

If it's for a MF couple you could try 'I command thee .....'

If it's for a single female, meh, why bother ? Just flop ur waps out !"

Profile writing is surely your domain? Yours is one of the best.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Its easier to help others, if I was thinking for a project for myself I'd be stumped

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Are you writing profiles ?

If it's for a single bloke you could try 'Once upon a time ....'

If it's for a MF couple you could try 'I command thee .....'

If it's for a single female, meh, why bother ? Just flop ur waps out !

Profile writing is surely your domain? Yours is one of the best."

I didn't write mine

I just copied all the bad ones

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By *icketysplits OP   Woman
over a year ago

Way over Yonder, that's where I'm bound


"Are you writing profiles ?

If it's for a single bloke you could try 'Once upon a time ....'

If it's for a MF couple you could try 'I command thee .....'

If it's for a single female, meh, why bother ? Just flop ur waps out !

Profile writing is surely your domain? Yours is one of the best.

I didn't write mine

I just copied all the bad ones "

It wrote itself...

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By *icketysplits OP   Woman
over a year ago

Way over Yonder, that's where I'm bound

Thank you. The wisdom of (Fab) crowds worked. First line, a middle and a great last line all written. I'll fill it out in the morning and job done.

Ever so grateful.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

a orange is not a piece of fruit , u cant eat the orange and throw the peel away

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