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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Just rewrote my profile would like some feedback please don't be shy I can handle it haha.

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By *asmeenTV/TS
over a year ago

STOKE ON TRENT

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

There’s a typo in the first sentence.

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By *asmeenTV/TS
over a year ago

STOKE ON TRENT

Tricky

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By *offiaCoolWoman
over a year ago

Kidsgrove


"There’s a typo in the first sentence."

English may not be his first language or he may have dyslexia etc.

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By *asmeenTV/TS
over a year ago

STOKE ON TRENT


"There’s a typo in the first sentence.

English may not be his first language or he may have dyslexia etc."

He was joking

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"There’s a typo in the first sentence.

English may not be his first language or he may have dyslexia etc."

He’s just asked for advice on his profile, I’m giving advice.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"There’s a typo in the first sentence."

Thank you I've corrected

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By *asmeenTV/TS
over a year ago

STOKE ON TRENT

Great profile very honest xx we have spoke before

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By *affron40Woman
over a year ago

manchester

Do you know what, it’s not perfect but it reads like it’s natural. Do you read it and think ‘yes that sounds like me?’ If that’s a yes, keep it. This place needs folk who are themselves so just do you

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I like it. Making me question mine now though lol.

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By *allySlinkyWoman
over a year ago

Leeds

Why does being an ex alcoholic mean you can't drive ?

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By *offiaCoolWoman
over a year ago

Kidsgrove


"Why does being an ex alcoholic mean you can't drive ?"

Driving ban possibly.

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By *offiaCoolWoman
over a year ago

Kidsgrove


"I like it. Making me question mine now though lol.

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Nothing wrong with your profile, it reflects you

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Why does being an ex alcoholic mean you can't drive ?"

I was d*unk so I couldn't get behind a wheel to learn

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Why does being an ex alcoholic mean you can't drive ?

Driving ban possibly."

O no I'd never endanger a life even d*unk I had my witts thankfully

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By *offiaCoolWoman
over a year ago

Kidsgrove


"Why does being an ex alcoholic mean you can't drive ?

Driving ban possibly.

O no I'd never endanger a life even d*unk I had my witts thankfully "

Plenty of time to learn in the future

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By *heHungStudentMan
over a year ago

Kettering

Rewrite looks good mate definaterly comes across naturslly and sells you a hell of a lot more than some other peoples profiles do for them

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Do you know what, it’s not perfect but it reads like it’s natural. Do you read it and think ‘yes that sounds like me?’ If that’s a yes, keep it. This place needs folk who are themselves so just do you "

Thank you I wanted it to read natural I don't care about perfect as long as my authenticity rings true?

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By *affron40Woman
over a year ago

manchester


"Do you know what, it’s not perfect but it reads like it’s natural. Do you read it and think ‘yes that sounds like me?’ If that’s a yes, keep it. This place needs folk who are themselves so just do you

Thank you I wanted it to read natural I don't care about perfect as long as my authenticity rings true? "

I think it does it’s individual so I like it.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Do you know what, it’s not perfect but it reads like it’s natural. Do you read it and think ‘yes that sounds like me?’ If that’s a yes, keep it. This place needs folk who are themselves so just do you

Thank you I wanted it to read natural I don't care about perfect as long as my authenticity rings true?

I think it does it’s individual so I like it. "

Then it definitely is true to me an individual and proud

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By *ornyhappyCouple
over a year ago

perth

I like it. It feels honest..

K

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By *agneto.Man
over a year ago

Bham

Just my opinion, I know everyone loves to talk about this stuff these days, but there's information about your past that I don't think needs sharing right off the bat.

Nice that you're open and honest and that information may come out while chatting but your profile is your shop window, and some people might see some red flags in there that might trigger their own past experience and then not get to know you based on your past, and I'm sure that doesn't define you.

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By *asmeenTV/TS
over a year ago

STOKE ON TRENT


"Just my opinion, I know everyone loves to talk about this stuff these days, but there's information about your past that I don't think needs sharing right off the bat.

Nice that you're open and honest and that information may come out while chatting but your profile is your shop window, and some people might see some red flags in there that might trigger their own past experience and then not get to know you based on your past, and I'm sure that doesn't define you. "

True keep personal stuff until you establish a connection

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Just my opinion, I know everyone loves to talk about this stuff these days, but there's information about your past that I don't think needs sharing right off the bat.

Nice that you're open and honest and that information may come out while chatting but your profile is your shop window, and some people might see some red flags in there that might trigger their own past experience and then not get to know you based on your past, and I'm sure that doesn't define you. "

for me I've wasted enough time on people who didn't care so I'd sooner out the ones that dont. what happens if you get on well they find out I'm an ex alcoholic then time wasted on someone who doesn't meet my connection needs even if you got along well and then lost a friend; and I've also triggered that person anyway hypothetically speaking. I don't let my past define me and it also shouldn't define me to others they didn't know me then they know me now.

Thank you very much for your honesty

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