FabSwingers.com forum: How does my profile come across

By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Just looking for an honest evaluation, see if it connects to anyone. How does my profile come across?.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

From a straight guy...your first pic is to blurry...I would lose it

Change your profile pic,maybe crop the one of full body? Your a run of the mill type guy? Big yourself up a bit more,sell yourself better

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By *icecouple561Couple
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over a year ago

East Sussex

Welcome to fab and the forum

I think you come across very well.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Some punctuation might help but the structure, other than calling yourself average, is good.

Might be helpful to put in a picture of you smiling somewhere - you looked bored to death in some of them

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Looks ok to me.

What's the blurry pic with the wine bottles? Are you wedged into a toy car?

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By *igInHer14Man
over a year ago

Bolton

Please ladies & gents…

Cast your eyes over my profile too & hit me with your honest & how to improve it

Taaa

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Please ladies & gents…

Cast your eyes over my profile too & hit me with your honest & how to improve it

Taaa"

Sunburn looks sore.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Thank you x

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Lool nah, It was the steam from the hot tub I've taken it down now

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Cheers, made some changes

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By *irty desireWoman
over a year ago

Newcastle

"Please ladies & gents…

Cast your eyes over my profile too & hit me with your honest & how to improve it

Taaa"

You pictures are 7 years old!

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By *irty desireWoman
over a year ago

Newcastle

"Just looking for an honest evaluation, see if it connects to anyone. How does my profile come across?. "

Looks fine to me ! Good luck op

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"Just looking for an honest evaluation, see if it connects to anyone. How does my profile come across?.

Looks fine to me ! Good luck op"

Thank you x

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By *partharmonyCouple
over a year ago

Tonbridge

You need some more full stops in your text. You've only put them at the end of each paragraph. It makes it harder to read.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

anyone interested to give me pointers for my profile please?

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By *amesRobs1987Man
over a year ago

Brighton

Yeah need some full stops in that text mate, either that or put every different fact about yourself on a separate line. Good luck

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

You could trim the profile a bit - you've said a couple of things twice. For instance...

"I’m very open minded and open to most things", "I'm open to alot of things": alas this almost always translates as "timewaster" - you're better off saying what you're NOT interested in.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

How do you you know you have The highest level of hygene?

Do you really need to put that, isn't that standard?

Ditch the laying in bed pics.

They aren't cute.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Please ladies & gents…

Cast your eyes over my profile too & hit me with your honest & how to improve it

Where to start! Haha!

Taaa"

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"anyone interested to give me pointers for my profile please?"

Amend last 2 paragraphs, spelling etc, take out pic with the other dude

The rest reads nice though

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"anyone interested to give me pointers for my profile please?

Amend last 2 paragraphs, spelling etc, take out pic with the other dude

The rest reads nice though"

Thanks for the feedback x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"anyone interested to give me pointers for my profile please?

Amend last 2 paragraphs, spelling etc, take out pic with the other dude

The rest reads nice though

Thanks for the feedback x"

By amend i do mean delete most

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Please ladies & gents…

Cast your eyes over my profile too & hit me with your honest & how to improve it

Taaa"

You need new pictures!!

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By *aughty_Smooth_OperatorMan
over a year ago

Birmingham

"Please ladies & gents…

Cast your eyes over my profile too & hit me with your honest & how to improve it

Taaa

You pictures are 7 years old!"

How did you know they were that old?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"anyone interested to give me pointers for my profile please?

Amend last 2 paragraphs, spelling etc, take out pic with the other dude

The rest reads nice though

Thanks for the feedback x

By amend i do mean delete most"

wouldnt have been a bit easier if you said delete most rather than amend lol

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Since we’re on the topic, do any of you kind people mind having a look over my profile and giving me the cold hard truth?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"anyone interested to give me pointers for my profile please?

Amend last 2 paragraphs, spelling etc, take out pic with the other dude

The rest reads nice though

Thanks for the feedback x

By amend i do mean delete most

wouldnt have been a bit easier if you said delete most rather than amend lol"

Maybe,I was hoping he'd have the sense to see what shiukd stay and go in those two paragraph

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"anyone interested to give me pointers for my profile please?

Amend last 2 paragraphs, spelling etc, take out pic with the other dude

The rest reads nice though

Thanks for the feedback x

By amend i do mean delete most

wouldnt have been a bit easier if you said delete most rather than amend lol

Maybe,I was hoping he'd have the sense to see what shiukd stay and go in those two paragraph "

I mean you not he

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Since we’re on the topic, do any of you kind people mind having a look over my profile and giving me the cold hard truth? "

Too much to type but basically a lot of Waffling, we can see you not slim so no need to mention, repeatedly. Better pics

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By *ophieslutTV/TS
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over a year ago

Central

I learned that you are run of the mill type of guy and to ask if there's anything else I'd like to know. I guess you mean you are average.

Unfortunately, most men here will be average. If you are just emphasising that you are not distinct from the thousands of others, then you will struggle to make progress.

To get better results, you will probably have to make yourself stand out from the rest. Share your personality, your sexual skills, desires and what you'd assume partners will want to know.

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By *ophieslutTV/TS
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over a year ago

Central

"Since we’re on the topic, do any of you kind people mind having a look over my profile and giving me the cold hard truth? "

It's poor form to as good as hijack someone else's thread, as you can create 1 that gives you exclusive scrutiny, keeping advice clear.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"anyone interested to give me pointers for my profile please?

Amend last 2 paragraphs, spelling etc, take out pic with the other dude

The rest reads nice though

Thanks for the feedback x

By amend i do mean delete most

wouldnt have been a bit easier if you said delete most rather than amend lol

Maybe,I was hoping he'd have the sense to see what shiukd stay and go in those two paragraph

I mean you not he"

fair enough lol i did change the last 2 paragraphs but not sure what to delete lol..my brain can be turned off at stupid times lol

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Since we’re on the topic, do any of you kind people mind having a look over my profile and giving me the cold hard truth?

Too much to type but basically a lot of Waffling, we can see you not slim so no need to mention, repeatedly. Better pics"

Lol noted! Cheers!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Just looking for an honest evaluation, see if it connects to anyone. How does my profile come across?. "

Wonder Kid - interesting user name

Why kid?

I’m looking for a man, not a kid, so that would instantly put me off

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"Just looking for an honest evaluation, see if it connects to anyone. How does my profile come across?.

Wonder Kid - interesting user name

Why kid?

To be honest it was the first thing that popped in my head

I’m looking for a man, not a kid, so that would instantly put me off"

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By *irty desireWoman
over a year ago

Newcastle

"Please ladies & gents…

Cast your eyes over my profile too & hit me with your honest & how to improve it

Taaa

You pictures are 7 years old!

How did you know they were that old?"

It tells you!

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Hi, all

I've made alot of changes to my profile and all I can say is thank you everyone for your honesty.

Thank you =)

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