FabSwingers.com forum: Finally..updated my profile

By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

And actually put some text in.

I am asking for a critique please?

I know it probably needs tweaking!

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By *imi_RougeWoman
over a year ago

Portsmouth

Good, just missing an r in through x

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By *uke olovingmanMan
over a year ago

Gravesend

"And actually put some text in.

I am asking for a critique please?

I know it probably needs tweaking!"
for me .. personally ..your upper age is too low lol ...but you had me at twinkly eyes xx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I like it

because you are splendidly lovely

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

It’s very explanatory.

It’s honest and comes across as being written by a confident person.

If you’re happy that it represents your desires perfectly then tweak nothing.

I hope you attract some fulfilling action with it.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"And actually put some text in.

I am asking for a critique please?

I know it probably needs tweaking!"

You don't mention anything about which houseplants you like

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

the only issue i can see, is you don't have a Prin between your legs

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Great profile... Your lovely and easy going personality definitely comes through... Love the nod to rugby bods too!!

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By *otSoPoshWoman
over a year ago

In a ball gown because that's how we roll in N. Devon

Describes you well lovely, and is straight to the point about your desires.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"Good, just missing an r in through x"

Thankyou just changed it xx

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By *hilloutMan
over a year ago

All over the place! Northwesr, , Southwest

Reads well and to the point

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By *alty surpriseMan
over a year ago

Uttoxeter

Absolutely perfect... And like the mystery of marmiteville...

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"And actually put some text in.

I am asking for a critique please?

I know it probably needs tweaking!

You don't mention anything about which houseplants you like

Orchids

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By *adame BWoman
over a year ago

C'est moi Boudoir

"And actually put some text in.

I am asking for a critique please?

I know it probably needs tweaking!"

Top Mark's but I guarantee you that you will still get unsolicited dick pics

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Very nice indeed!

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"It’s very explanatory.

It’s honest and comes across as being written by a confident person.

If you’re happy that it represents your desires perfectly then tweak nothing.

I hope you attract some fulfilling action with it."

I need to tweak the line about meeting men but not sure how to say it. I dont want one offs, just a few repeated meets possibly over years rather than one nighters!

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"And actually put some text in.

I am asking for a critique please?

I know it probably needs tweaking!

Top Mark's but I guarantee you that you will still get unsolicited dick pics

For sure!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Love it!!

Just nudge your age range up a bit..... Purely selfish of course

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By *rder66Man
over a year ago

Tatooine

Good but, how did you discribe me so perfectly

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By *atricia ParnelWoman
over a year ago

In a town full of colours

You are listed as straight Tess and looking for women x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Concise to the point, well written to what your looking for

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I’d fuck you!

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"I’d fuck you!

Yeah yeah, but only if you bring Brad as well!

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By *ily WhiteWoman
over a year ago

Sorry to be the grammar nerd, but you've used the wrong "your" in the first paragraph.

Apart from that, it's to the point

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Have tweaked the middle bit about what I seek x

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"Sorry to be the grammar nerd, but you've used the wrong "your" in the first paragraph.

Apart from that, it's to the point

Oh god!

Thanks, sorted it!

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By *om and JennieCouple
over a year ago

Chams or Socials

It’s you in a profile.

Just check a few apostrophes & I think you’ve spelt monogamous wrong but apart from that, it’s pure you xx

J x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

A most eloquent piece of prose construction. I read all of it (right to the end) and was enthralled.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"It’s you in a profile.

Just check a few apostrophes & I think you’ve spelt monogamous wrong but apart from that, it’s pure you xx

J x"

Thanks, have gone back and done it, hopefully it's ok now xx

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By *eliWoman
over a year ago

I don't have anything to add re profile improvement but I will say I hope it brings you good friendship and decent cock.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"I don't have anything to add re profile improvement but I will say I hope it brings you good friendship and decent cock.

You should write greetings cards Meli.

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By *innie The MinxWoman
over a year ago

Under the Duvet

Reads well

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By *atricia ParnelWoman
over a year ago

In a town full of colours

It suits you well now

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By *eliWoman
over a year ago

"I don't have anything to add re profile improvement but I will say I hope it brings you good friendship and decent cock.

You should write greetings cards Meli."

Why thank you p for acknowledging my talents. That's very kind of you.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"I don't have anything to add re profile improvement but I will say I hope it brings you good friendship and decent cock.

You should write greetings cards Meli.

Why thank you p for acknowledging my talents. That's very kind of you.

My pleasure. I've always appreciated your talents.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"I don't have anything to add re profile improvement but I will say I hope it brings you good friendship and decent cock.

Oh thankyou Gorgeous!

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By *partharmonyCouple
over a year ago

Ruislip

You're not going to get anywhere until you put some cock photos in.

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