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"Still Life" a POEM

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

"Still Life"

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I am motionless

while you capture me.

Locked in a frozen prison

While your eyes dart over my form.

Static.

Helpless.

Transfixed for a moment of time.

My mind is the only part

of me that can wander.

My body is bound,

Without restraints,

Only your will.

What are you seeing?

Merely shapes?

Lines you make on a page?

Or the woman in front of you!

The muse,

Longing for her Artist.

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(Written by BellaNightshade November 2020)

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By *hilloutMan
over a year ago

All over the place! Northwesr, , Southwest

Wow...very good

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Wow...very good "

Thanks! my muse struck in the middle of the night a couple of days ago.

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By *hilloutMan
over a year ago

All over the place! Northwesr, , Southwest


"Wow...very good

Thanks! my muse struck in the middle of the night a couple of days ago. "

When inspiration strikes, always best to act on it then and there

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

You've just inspired me to share one of mine.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Wow...very good

Thanks! my muse struck in the middle of the night a couple of days ago.

When inspiration strikes, always best to act on it then and there "

I did! I had to get out of bed at 4am, go downstairs to find a notepad and pencil & write it down while the main parts were strongly in my mind, or I knew I would have forgotten it all again come the morning.

I then couldn't get back to sleep until I finished it!

I have since bought a notepad to keep beside my bed in case my muse visits me again during the night!

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"You've just inspired me to share one of mine. "

Oh great!

I would like to read it.

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By *hilloutMan
over a year ago

All over the place! Northwesr, , Southwest


"Wow...very good

Thanks! my muse struck in the middle of the night a couple of days ago.

When inspiration strikes, always best to act on it then and there

I did! I had to get out of bed at 4am, go downstairs to find a notepad and pencil & write it down while the main parts were strongly in my mind, or I knew I would have forgotten it all again come the morning.

I then couldn't get back to sleep until I finished it!

I have since bought a notepad to keep beside my bed in case my muse visits me again during the night!"

I did similar when I was in my story writing phase. Creative impulse must be harnessed.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"You've just inspired me to share one of mine.

Oh great!

I would like to read it."

I stuck it in the stories forum x

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"You've just inspired me to share one of mine.

Oh great!

I would like to read it.

I stuck it in the stories forum x"

Found it! Great work. I have left you a comment there.

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By *he Mac LassWoman
over a year ago

Hefty Hideaway

That’s really well put together.

I do love poetry

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"That’s really well put together.

I do love poetry "

Thank you very much

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Love it.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

You describe that feeling of being under someone's gaze really well.

Be good to write another one from the artist's pov maybe?

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"You describe that feeling of being under someone's gaze really well.

Be good to write another one from the artist's pov maybe? "

That is a good idea! I am sure my muse will provide me with the right words to do that.

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By *rHotNottsMan
over a year ago

Dubai & Nottingham

I like it

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By *ty31Man
over a year ago

NW London

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