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By *layfullsam OP   Man
over a year ago

Solihull

In 30 words or less write your own erotic paragraph, person below comments on how it makes them feel then leaves there own eroctic lines

mine is,

"as there lips met, she closed her legs and smashed his glasses"

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By *ce WingerMan
over a year ago

P.O. Box DE1 0NQ

Just as I was about to climb on board she whispered "Tickets please"

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By *ranny-CrumpetWoman
over a year ago

The Town by The Cross


"In 30 words or less write your own erotic paragraph, person below comments on how it makes them feel then leaves there own eroctic lines

mine is,

"as there lips met, she closed her legs and smashed his glasses""

The intense eroticism of this short , concise but nevertheless moving piece forces the reader to understand how the man , lured in by the aroma of elastoplast , was drawn to put his lips against the womans without considering the risks of snogging a world champion contortionist.

Alone, without sight , he feels bewildered and doomed to suck fanny like a limpet until the courier arrives with his repaired specs.

The passage makes my clunge react as if someone just gave it a shot of vinegar.

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