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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

My wife used to say:

Why spend hours at the gym, to keep yourself slim?

Nobody's looking at you!

Why mess with your head, dye your hair red?

Nobody's looking at you!

Why wear your smart suit, on the daily commute?

Nobody's looking at you!

Why watch what you eat, with a face like regurgitated meat?

Nobody's looking at you!

So I hit her with a spade, on the floor she lays splayed.

Nobody's looking at you!

Her eyes roll back in her head, I'm certain she's dead.

Nobody's looking at you!

There's blood on the floor, as she's dragged through the door.

Nobody's looking at you!

She burns in the fire, the flames roaring higher,

Nobody's looking at you!

I've killed that is true, but I'll get away with it too,

Because........

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

DV is fun

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"DV is fun "

What's DV?

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By *oodnitegirlWoman
over a year ago

Yorkshire

Are you Dennis Nilsen?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"My wife used to say:

Why spend hours at the gym, to keep yourself slim?

Nobody's looking at you!

Why mess with your head, dye your hair red?

Nobody's looking at you!

Why wear your smart suit, on the daily commute?

Nobody's looking at you!

Why watch what you eat, with a face like regurgitated meat?

Nobody's looking at you!

So I hit her with a spade, on the floor she lays splayed.

Nobody's looking at you!

Her eyes roll back in her head, I'm certain she's dead.

Nobody's looking at you!

There's blood on the floor, as she's dragged through the door.

Nobody's looking at you!

She burns in the fire, the flames roaring higher,

Nobody's looking at you!

I've killed that is true, but I'll get away with it too,

Because........"

Very lyrical

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Are you Dennis Nilsen?"

I think more John Cooper Clarke.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Are you Dennis Nilsen?

I think more John Cooper Clarke."

Excellent! I really enjoy these

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Are you Dennis Nilsen?

I think more John Cooper Clarke.

Excellent! I really enjoy these "

I hope to have some live performance dates for next year, Covid permitting. I'll keep you posted.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"DV is fun

What's DV?"

Domestic violence.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"DV is fun

What's DV?

Domestic violence."

That's a strange thing to say as the poem is literally all about the damage both emotional and physical abuse in a relationship can cause.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

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