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A poem for bank holiday

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

It's called 'The Bath'.

Hopes you likes it:

Empty mould reclining

Glossy surface shining

Arms and shoulders smoothly rounded

Hull and bow correctly grounded

A yawn to take the water hollow

A winking sleepy fall to follow

Bellows deeply hasten

Swelling chimes awaken

Seeping skin impulsive rising

The blooming call of worlds colliding

Expectantly the patient depth

Concedes to silent levels met

Open stand divested

Babbling time arrested

Afoot to break the warming veil

Glide secretly beneath the rail

Restless lapping curling shroud

Embrace of steamy dreams endowed

Happy BH

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By *he Mac LassWoman
over a year ago

Hefty Hideaway

I adore a rhyming couplet.

Good work

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Beautiful poem Laure. & a Happy Bank Holiday to you too x

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By *otmale5Man
over a year ago

glasgow

Roses are red , violets are blue. Never slept much last night flicking knackered ..ode. To sleep ..by H xx

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