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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Hope you like it:

Icy mirror on the wall

Shattered would you break a fall

Frozen explosion tearing the air

Showering diamonds everywhere

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Hope you like it:

Icy mirror on the wall

Shattered would you break a fall

Frozen explosion tearing the air

Showering diamonds everywhere"

Are you sure your profile should be called “laure”?

And not laureate

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

A sunny day May '93, you popped out and you first saw me. I held you close before all others, you never had sisters or brothers my only Son you were to be, I loved you Son and you loved me...

You knew this Son while you were living, how cruel life takes when it stops giving.

In 6 minutes at 12.57 6 weeks ago your spirit rode up to heaven.

Ride free up there Son as fast as you like, one day Dad will get up on his bike and catch you on those roads above, theres no goodbyes Son only love...

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By *rincess peachWoman
over a year ago

shits creek


"A sunny day May '93, you popped out and you first saw me. I held you close before all others, you never had sisters or brothers my only Son you were to be, I loved you Son and you loved me...

You knew this Son while you were living, how cruel life takes when it stops giving.

In 6 minutes at 12.57 6 weeks ago your spirit rode up to heaven.

Ride free up there Son as fast as you like, one day Dad will get up on his bike and catch you on those roads above, theres no goodbyes Son only love..."

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Hope you like it:

Icy mirror on the wall

Shattered would you break a fall

Frozen explosion tearing the air

Showering diamonds everywhere"

This is really lovely did you write it?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"A sunny day May '93, you popped out and you first saw me. I held you close before all others, you never had sisters or brothers my only Son you were to be, I loved you Son and you loved me...

You knew this Son while you were living, how cruel life takes when it stops giving.

In 6 minutes at 12.57 6 weeks ago your spirit rode up to heaven.

Ride free up there Son as fast as you like, one day Dad will get up on his bike and catch you on those roads above, theres no goodbyes Son only love..."

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Hope you like it:

Icy mirror on the wall

Shattered would you break a fall

Frozen explosion tearing the air

Showering diamonds everywhere"

Thank you! You inspired me to begin writing poems again. You are my muse. x

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