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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

So this is not a woe is me, the site is shit type post, I've just updated my profile and would like some feedback.

Thanks for taking your time to look

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

It’s perfect. 10/10

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Seriously

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By *luebell888Woman
over a year ago

Glasgowish

Yes. Looking good to me.x

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Yes. Looking good to me.x"

Thanks bluebell

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By *iamondCougarWoman
over a year ago

Norfuck! / Lincolnshire

Sounds good to me

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Sounds good to me "

Thanks cougar

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By *ark ph0enixWoman
over a year ago

Teesside

Looks good. Clear, appealing and to the point.

Only other thing I'd suggest is perhaps mentioning some of the things you enjoy most. That can give a good starting off point for conversation on a common ground.

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By *orthern StarsCouple
over a year ago

Durham

We like it. Great photos and informative text.

Well done

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By *innie The MinxWoman
over a year ago

Under the Duvet

Well written, but I like a bit of humour in my profiles.

Otherwise comes across ok

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Thanks everyone

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Couple of grammar/typos.

You use "I love" twice in a row to start a new paragraphed sentence.

No commas in the first sentence.

Very stop starty (too many very short paragraphs/single sentences)

But if you just mean content, it's fine.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Couple of grammar/typos.

You use "I love" twice in a row to start a new paragraphed sentence.

No commas in the first sentence.

Very stop starty (too many very short paragraphs/single sentences)

But if you just mean content, it's fine. "

Thanks I will have a look at this

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Thanks everyone for taking the time to look

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By *partharmonyCouple
over a year ago

Ruislip

"Hope your all well!" should be "Hope you're all well!".

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Can't see a problem with it. Good going!

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By *oxyvixen99Woman
over a year ago

Newtownabbey

It's a good profile

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Thanks everyone I'm taking all comments on board

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Seen better seen worse its in the better half side but in all honesty it could still be improved on is it had more soul in it.

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