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Poetry Corner - Rain

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

I'm in work, nothings happening just yet and I have time to watch the rain fall. So I thought I might write a small poem and if anyone else would like to have a go at putting their mind to work on a rain themed poem that'd be awesome

Rain

You fall from great heights to land on my head,

Where you aiming for me? Or was it just luck instead?

You drop from my brow and onto my nose,

You soak me to the skin, right through my clothes.

I'm not mad at you rain, I quite like the feeling,

Your invigorating touch I find so appealing.

You liven me up as I run towards shelter,

Though I still curse your name and call you a melter.

I couldnt be without you rain, of that I'm quite sure,

If you never fell again I couldn't possibly endure.

Though I welcome the heat that comes with the sun,

Sun without rain would be no balance and no fun.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Rain rain go away come again another day I've got washing to put out!

On a serious note I liked yours a lot X

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Rain rain go away come again another day I've got washing to put out!

On a serious note I liked yours a lot X "

Thank you

I like yours too and I hope you get your washing out

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I wrote this for Estella’s rain thread a couple of days ago

The clouds bruised and swollen,

Bloated with pain

The heavens divide and open

And down pours the rain

Beating relentlessly on the rooftops below

Torrents through gutters and pipes do flow

Gushing and sloshing rapidly through the drains

Rushing yet washing our sorrows away

The cold front soon clears and clouds do relent

Shafts of sunlight, reflections prismatically bent

Mist rising off fences back up to the sky

Pavements now steaming as the wet surface dries

Warmth replaces the hurt of a heart once broken

The sun rays whispering in a voice softly spoken

Never forget when your feeling in pain

There’ll always be sunshine, after the rain.

Courtesy of YOWD Brainfarts ©™

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"I wrote this for Estella’s rain thread a couple of days ago

The clouds bruised and swollen,

Bloated with pain

The heavens divide and open

And down pours the rain

Beating relentlessly on the rooftops below

Torrents through gutters and pipes do flow

Gushing and sloshing rapidly through the drains

Rushing yet washing our sorrows away

The cold front soon clears and clouds do relent

Shafts of sunlight, reflections prismatically bent

Mist rising off fences back up to the sky

Pavements now steaming as the wet surface dries

Warmth replaces the hurt of a heart once broken

The sun rays whispering in a voice softly spoken

Never forget when your feeling in pain

There’ll always be sunshine, after the rain.

Courtesy of YOWD Brainfarts ©™"

That's fantastic man! A very well written poem

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"I wrote this for Estella’s rain thread a couple of days ago

The clouds bruised and swollen,

Bloated with pain

The heavens divide and open

And down pours the rain

Beating relentlessly on the rooftops below

Torrents through gutters and pipes do flow

Gushing and sloshing rapidly through the drains

Rushing yet washing our sorrows away

The cold front soon clears and clouds do relent

Shafts of sunlight, reflections prismatically bent

Mist rising off fences back up to the sky

Pavements now steaming as the wet surface dries

Warmth replaces the hurt of a heart once broken

The sun rays whispering in a voice softly spoken

Never forget when your feeling in pain

There’ll always be sunshine, after the rain.

Courtesy of YOWD Brainfarts ©™

That's fantastic man! A very well written poem "

Thanks - yours was really good too

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By *arksxMan
over a year ago

Leicester / London

I don't like to add this...about rain

A forgotten gem

https://youtu.be/15kWlTrpt5k

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Word porn

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By *istressnMasterprowlingCouple
over a year ago

Waterford

It's raining it's poring,

The old perve is snoring ,

He went to bed to give some head,

and couldn't perform in the morning.

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By *lik and PaulCouple
over a year ago

Flagrante

There are holes in the sky where the rain gets in, but they're ever so small that's why rain is thin.

Spike Milligan

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By *ris GrayMan
over a year ago

Dorchester

Take me dancing naked in the rain cover me in ecstacy

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

A joyous time in Barcelona

But it pissed it down

So we lingered no longer

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By *obyn GravesTV/TS
over a year ago

1127 walnut avenue

It's raining it's wet.. forgot me umbrella...fuckin eck

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