FabSwingers.com forum: Profile

By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Can anyone help a guy out and tell me where my profile could improve on

Many Thanks Fabbers

By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Hi Ted,

I’m not exactly an expert but I see a few flaws.

Firstly there’s a discrepancy with your age. The profile says you’re 41 and your blurb says you’re 43.

There are also a couple of spelling mistakes. I know this may sound petty but your target may look at that and mark you down.

Reading the text it comes across as sterile. It sounds like it’s a CV type of thing. Try to inject your personality in that part.

As previously mentioned I am not an expert and if you look at my profile and do the opposite you’ll be fine as I haven’t had much luck. Haha

I hope this helps.

By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Thanks naughty 66 for ur time"

No worries. I hope it helps. I’m sure there’ll be plenty of others who will chip in.