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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

I wrote this for a x of mine

Our faith in love is easy

When the waters round are stilled

And the voyage undertaken

Finds our dreams and hopes fulfilled

But holding onto love is hard

When wrestling with our doubt

Its then the storms are fiercest

And our boat is tossed about

Its then our faith is shaken

As the world is fast asleep

Not knowing we are sinking

While the waters round are deep

It’s when our faith seems weakest

Love will calm the sea and soul

And when we are most broken

It’ll touch and make us whole.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

That's very sweet

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By *owdyboy 890Man
over a year ago

Country West

May I say very well written

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By *ccommodating GuyMan
over a year ago

Outside

That really is so well written and so so sweet !!!

Thanks for sharing that with us, it'll ease my mind when I imagine your ex being fucked to high heavens by the guy you're not !!!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

That is really well put. A lovely poem that expresses clearly the complicated, confusing but basically simple nature of love in a very few words.

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By *he HunterMan
over a year ago

leitrim

How come I heard that a wedding not that long ago??

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

That's deep OP, I did one as well once...he must have felt the love because he cried after reading it.

Thanks for the fun

It was good for a while

But I fancy your brother over you by a mile

It's me not you, you're a really nice guy

But Steve is hung

So this is goodbye.

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By *unnitoesWoman
over a year ago

Belfast


"How come I heard that a wedding not that long ago??"

The OP was at that wedding??

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

It started with a click,

Then you consumed my mind,

The thoughts of getting close to you,

A treasure im searching to find.

When we chat, text and laugh,

Our wants and fantasies seem like one,

I know this is a site for having sex,

But the build up is half fun.

Soon our bodies will entangle,

A passionate embrace to start,

Pleasure provided and received,

Sexual gratification is an art.

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By *he HunterMan
over a year ago

leitrim


"How come I heard that a wedding not that long ago??

The OP was at that wedding??"

I doubt it. They downloaded it from a poem site

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I'm liking it mate well written so it is, more impressed by you sharing this though.

Now......

I wrote one for my ex and was wondering if you could give me some pointers as she hasn't replied back to me.

I find it a tat awkward sharing this on here but here goes.....

BLUE EYES

Your a horrible fucking cunt

Hope you get the clap

Call me

She's real smart you know, one of those people that is from a higher social class you hear so much about on here. I'm thinking I might have screwed up with my punctuations (she's funny like that). Suggestions please, I do miss her ever so much

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"How come I heard that a wedding not that long ago??"

Because it was really written by Sister Miriam Barker, it's called "Faith in doubt"...

Our esteemed cat burglar just can't give up the life.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"I'm liking it mate well written so it is, more impressed by you sharing this though.

Now......

I wrote one for my ex and was wondering if you could give me some pointers as she hasn't replied back to me.

I find it a tat awkward sharing this on here but here goes.....

BLUE EYES

Your a horrible fucking cunt

Hope you get the clap

Call me

She's real smart you know, one of those people that is from a higher social class you hear so much about on here. I'm thinking I might have screwed up with my punctuations (she's funny like that). Suggestions please, I do miss her ever so much "

Heart wrenching stuff

OP, why waste everyone's time passing something off as your own, when it's clearly borrowed from somewhere else? Changing a few words here and there doesn't give you the right to claim it as your own, whether it's a poem or your oddly familiar profile text.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"How come I heard that a wedding not that long ago??

Because it was really written by Sister Miriam Barker, it's called "Faith in doubt"...

Our esteemed cat burglar just can't give up the life."

I

. Sometimes I truly dispair Did he not figure someone would google it

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

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By *he HunterMan
over a year ago

leitrim

I guess he just likes to be noticed. Maybe he was hoping for a pity fuck.

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