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Keats is Dead so Fuck me From Behind

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

By Hera Lindsay Bird

Keats is dead so fuck me from behind

Slowly and with carnal purpose

Some black midwinter afternoon

While all the children are walking home from school

Peel my stockings down with your teeth

Coleridge is dead and Auden too

Of laughing in an overcoat

Shelley died at sea and his heart wouldn’t burn

& Wordsworth……………………………………………..

They never found his body

His widow mad with grief, hammering nails into an empty meadow

Byron, Whitman, our dog crushed by the garage door

Finger me slowly

In the snowscape of your childhood

Our dead floating just below the surface of the earth

Bend me over like a substitute teacher

& pump me full of shivering arrows

O emotional vulnerability

Bosnian folk-song, birds in the chimney

Tell me what you love when you think I’m not listening

Wallace Stevens’s mother is calling him in for dinner

But he’s not coming, he’s dead too, he died sixty years ago

And nobody cared at his funeral

Life is real

And the days burn off like leopard print

Nobody, not even the dead can tell me what to do

Eat my pussy from behind

Bill Manhire’s not getting any younger

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By *ilderMan
over a year ago

dublin

Bend me over like a substitute teacher? Are regular teachers not worthy of being bent over or something? Come back to us when it's finished

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

"Finger me slowly in the snowscape of your childhood" is the phrase that jumps out for me - what's wrong with the back of tesco?

(Also, just to clarify, not my work. New Zealand's hottest new poet, apparently)

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

It's odd and weird. I like it

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Its absolute fuckin rubbish. ..imo

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

First time I read it I thought it was utter, laugh out loud shite, but it's kinda grown on me... it's not ee cummings but I like it

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By *oggoneMan
over a year ago

Derry

Thanks, I liked that.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"First time I read it I thought it was utter, laugh out loud shite, but it's kinda grown on me... it's not ee cummings but I like it"
....One direction can also grow on you...its still ahite...

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"First time I read it I thought it was utter, laugh out loud shite, but it's kinda grown on me... it's not ee cummings but I like it....One direction can also grow on you...its still ahite..."
......shite..

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I have absolutely no idea what its about

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"I have absolutely no idea what its about"
....think Picasso painted in the style of rolf Harris

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"First time I read it I thought it was utter, laugh out loud shite, but it's kinda grown on me... it's not ee cummings but I like it....One direction can also grow on you...its still ahite.........shite.."

Don't sit on the fence here Warrior Queen , just tell us how you really think of it

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"First time I read it I thought it was utter, laugh out loud shite, but it's kinda grown on me... it's not ee cummings but I like it....One direction can also grow on you...its still ahite.........shite..

Don't sit on the fence here Warrior Queen , just tell us how you really think of it "
..ok..no more sugar coating it..

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Even the greats die, no matter how good. So fuck it - and fuck her as well! Death defining life, and life is just sex maybe?

Don't know about Picasso in the style of Rolf Harris... but Id be in interested in Rolf Harris in the style of Picasso!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Even the greats die, no matter how good. So fuck it - and fuck her as well! Death defining life, and life is just sex maybe?

Don't know about Picasso in the style of Rolf Harris... but Id be in interested in Rolf Harris in the style of Picasso!"
...it reminds me of those "theatre groups" in the 80s..who read out mindless drivel while naked. Take the sexual references out of this, and read it again. ..even with the fuck words in..its indecipherable.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

The whole thing is about sex and death... wouldn't really work without the sex stuff...

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"The whole thing is about sex and death... wouldn't really work without the sex stuff..."
.....clumsy....its the best I can do......

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By *oghunter33Woman
over a year ago

on the hill NordWest of


"The whole thing is about sex and death... wouldn't really work without the sex stuff..."

Neither would it the other way around. Then does it work as a whole? The thin line between life and death, pulse and corpse, carnage and pain everywhere bla bla bla, I prefer to look at a Picasso and have a wank.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Picasso's a nightmare when it comes to the cumshot though

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Lets just hope she/he stays in the southern hemisphere. ...

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Lets just hope she/he stays in the southern hemisphere. ..."

She has a poem called Monica... way too long to copy and paste here, and links are frowned upon... but I'd love to hear your thoughts!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

It's interesting for sure. It's hard to judge a poet on just one of his work's. If we took just of years or Patrick kavanaghs work's on its on merit not knowing who it was by we would probably say it was pure shite. Put a name to it and we gush praise. Yeah screw it, I like it

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Lets just hope she/he stays in the southern hemisphere. ...

She has a poem called Monica... way too long to copy and paste here, and links are frowned upon... but I'd love to hear your thoughts! "
...I'll have a look later...im listening to the bay city rollers back catalogue. .so im slightly preoccupied atm..

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

It's a load of bollix...

Fuck me from behind with carnal purposes....... he's feckin hardly doing it to fix the fuckin immersion

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"It's a load of bollix...

Fuck me from behind with carnal purposes....... he's feckin hardly doing it to fix the fuckin immersion "
.....have you ever thought of taking up writing yourself?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"It's a load of bollix...

Fuck me from behind with carnal purposes....... he's feckin hardly doing it to fix the fuckin immersion .....have you ever thought of taking up writing yourself? "
... I have but the mother goes mad when I use the crayons on the wallpaper

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"It's a load of bollix...

Fuck me from behind with carnal purposes....... he's feckin hardly doing it to fix the fuckin immersion .....have you ever thought of taking up writing yourself? ... I have but the mother goes mad when I use the crayons on the wallpaper "
....ah mammies.....the bane of creative writing. ..

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Lets just hope she/he stays in the southern hemisphere. ...

She has a poem called Monica... way too long to copy and paste here, and links are frowned upon... but I'd love to hear your thoughts! "

Read it. There's something about her writing that I like. Not all of it, but an odd sentence here and there throughout gets to me.

Thanks for the introduction

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By *ir1967Man
over a year ago

in da sticks, london, amsterdam, madrid

Where do you get the stuff he is smoking or drinking?

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Where do you get the stuff he is smoking or drinking?"

Im guessing she gets it in New Zealand... is it really that bizzare?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I like it. End of.

This place could do with poetry...well done op.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Where do you get the stuff he is smoking or drinking?

Im guessing she gets it in New Zealand... is it really that bizzare?"
...if any of my kids handed that up as a project. ..id be calling social services. .

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Where do you get the stuff he is smoking or drinking?

Im guessing she gets it in New Zealand... is it really that bizzare?...if any of my kids handed that up as a project. ..id be calling social services. . "

I think they'd be calling you

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