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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Hi folks

I created myself a single profile at sir1967. Would love some feedback whether I met the appropriate tone and whether the reader considers it in sync with the couple profile of ours.

Thanks

Sir1967

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By *ub_leitrim_guyMan
over a year ago

Out in the sticks

Will read it when I have a week off!!

Do you expect people to read all that?

..you did ask!!

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Will read it when I have a week off!!

Do you expect people to read all that?

..you did ask!!"

Hmmm...actually when I think about it...then....yes.

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By *ub_leitrim_guyMan
over a year ago

Out in the sticks


"Will read it when I have a week off!!

Do you expect people to read all that?

..you did ask!!

Hmmm...actually when I think about it...then....yes. "

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Excellent profile single lads take heed

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Excellent profile single lads take heed "

Thank you

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By *ohn MingoMan
over a year ago

Dublin

As someone who has met you,its very.....you.

Women like to read, and even though I've no one liner profile myself, I think it is a little long.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"As someone who has met you,its very.....you.

Women like to read, and even though I've no one liner profile myself, I think it is a little long. "

Thanks Mingo. Where would you recommend to cut?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Have to say it's perfect!

Can give a giggle,no bs,and pretty well thought out!

I like..well done Mr.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Have to say it's perfect!

Can give a giggle,no bs,and pretty well thought out!

I like..well done Mr. "

Thank you Annie, that motivates to hold the line. Time will tell the scores

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Yep I like it

Mrs B

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By *ierycrackWoman
over a year ago

SOMEWHERE ELUSIVE........AND HOT!!!

A very well put together profile and also very interesting to read.

Most refreshing.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"A very well put together profile and also very interesting to read.

Most refreshing.

"

Thank you.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

if more single guys even put in half the effort you have they might find themselves playing a bit more

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By *-ManMan
over a year ago

Kark

Very well put together and I get the feeling your monkier is pretty apt! Few more pics and you'll be King of Fab!

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"if more single guys even put in half the effort you have they might find themselves playing a bit more "

Thank you. It actually took only 10 minutes in total. 5 when I initially started and 5 today. To bad that as a "newbie" I cannot message you unless you invite me onto your friends list

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


" To bad that as a "newbie" I cannot message you unless you invite me onto your friends list"

sorted

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Very well put together and I get the feeling your monkier is pretty apt! Few more pics and you'll be King of Fab!"

With the pics is a good one...

Any ladies with photographer skills out there who would like to make some hot shots? Those selfies always always look awkward in MHO

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By *at69driveMan
over a year ago

Hertford


"Hi folks

I created myself a single profile at sir1967. Would love some feedback whether I met the appropriate tone and whether the reader considers it in sync with the couple profile of ours.

Thanks

Sir1967"
. A well written profile with good pictures and plenty of detail. It is both interesting , informative and amusing . You clearly state your likes and dislikes . I also like the layout. It helps members to avoid wasting time as your selection criteria are clearly specified .

If someone goes to the effort of writing a decent profile , they are probably good at lots of different things .

This profile is probably one , if not the best that I have seen on fab.

Well done

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Very well put together and I get the feeling your monkier is pretty apt! Few more pics and you'll be King of Fab!

With the pics is a good one...

Any ladies with photographer skills out there who would like to make some hot shots? Those selfies always always look awkward in MHO "

Ummmm.... your wife?

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Very well put together and I get the feeling your monkier is pretty apt! Few more pics and you'll be King of Fab!

With the pics is a good one...

Any ladies with photographer skills out there who would like to make some hot shots? Those selfies always always look awkward in MHO

Ummmm.... your wife?"

Hehe...cannot post on forums yet with the single account...but I will book you on that. So get the cam ready when I am coming home on Friday

I am looking forward to be your model hun

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By *-ManMan
over a year ago

Kark


"Very well put together and I get the feeling your monkier is pretty apt! Few more pics and you'll be King of Fab!

With the pics is a good one...

Any ladies with photographer skills out there who would like to make some hot shots? Those selfies always always look awkward in MHO

Ummmm.... your wife?"

I Lol'd

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Very well put together and I get the feeling your monkier is pretty apt! Few more pics and you'll be King of Fab!

With the pics is a good one...

Any ladies with photographer skills out there who would like to make some hot shots? Those selfies always always look awkward in MHO

Ummmm.... your wife?

I Lol'd "

Just perved your profile and it is well done too. Like your black and white images...nice

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"

Ummmm.... your wife?

I Lol'd "

us too

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I read the couple profile...well..i say that..i took it on last week and still haven't finished it...

..can I maybe bring your single profile on holiday with me over the new year..im stuck for something to read..

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"I read the couple profile...well..i say that..i took it on last week and still haven't finished it...

..can I maybe bring your single profile on holiday with me over the new year..im stuck for something to read.. "

Sure, if less than half A4 entertains your reading needs for a few days...

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I luv da mister men boks!!!!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Both profiles are sophisticated, tastefully done and you will reap the rewards of meeting similar minds xx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


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Sure, if less than half A4 entertains your reading needs for a few days..."

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Both profiles are sophisticated, tastefully done and you will reap the rewards of meeting similar minds xx "

Thank you...hope your words may reach Cupids ear

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By *ommickMan
over a year ago

cork

very impressive well put together uve set the bar high ! best of luck !

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Both profiles are sophisticated, tastefully done and you will reap the rewards of meeting similar minds xx

Thank you...hope your words may reach Cupids ear"

Cupid was a cheeky flirt

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Ah sure my own is grand why copy and paste yours

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Its thousand times better than mine sir

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By *-ManMan
over a year ago

Kark


"Very well put together and I get the feeling your monkier is pretty apt! Few more pics and you'll be King of Fab!

With the pics is a good one...

Any ladies with photographer skills out there who would like to make some hot shots? Those selfies always always look awkward in MHO

Ummmm.... your wife?

I Lol'd

Just perved your profile and it is well done too. Like your black and white images...nice"

Thank you

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"if more single guys even put in half the effort you have they might find themselves playing a bit more "
my friend. profile means f all, its when you meet the person, face to face, then you can see and feel if there is a future in ones encounters,

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I like it few spelling errors that need corrected but beyond that, it's a good profile

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

It's very nice and it suits your personality. If I had a good camera I'd help with pics...but only have an old phone that I take my selfies with.....

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"if more single guys even put in half the effort you have they might find themselves playing a bit more my friend. profile means f all, its when you meet the person, face to face, then you can see and feel if there is a future in ones encounters, "
which is exactly what we do,but a profile that tells us about the person is going to get our attention over profiles with little to no information.For instance a lot of mens profile blurb simply says "here to meet women and couples"well duh.whereas an interesting profile that tells us about the guy with some nice pics will catch our eye everytime.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"if more single guys even put in half the effort you have they might find themselves playing a bit more my friend. profile means f all, its when you meet the person, face to face, then you can see and feel if there is a future in ones encounters, which is exactly what we do,but a profile that tells us about the person is going to get our attention over profiles with little to no information.For instance a lot of mens profile blurb simply says "here to meet women and couples"well duh.whereas an interesting profile that tells us about the guy with some nice pics will catch our eye everytime."

A profile with too much self-praise or even pretension is pretty off-putting to us. It's about whether the person can put together an introductory message that catches the eye and follow it up with intelligent conversation.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


" Would love some feedback whether I met the appropriate tone and whether the reader considers it in sync with the couple profile of ours.

"

Excellent! Can't wait to entertain you and the hotwife. There'll be no overcooked vegetables or instant coffee, I promise.

Now, put an 'e' on that 'profile' and it'll be perfect.. well, you did ask!

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By *oghunter33Woman
over a year ago

on the hill NordWest of

The profile portrays a picture of your personality (appealing or not to the observer is depending on the individual). Hence it's a good profile because you can actually see a genuine person behind it.

My only critique, it's a bit too much info I don't need to know for nsa fun. Also one more pic showing some flesh would be good.

Finally and you asked to compare the two profiles! It's interesting that on your couple profile you're into safe sex while on your single one you're not!!!!

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By *ardy cowboyMan
over a year ago

every wheat field around Midlands


"The profile portrays a picture of your personality (appealing or not to the observer is depending on the individual). Hence it's a good profile because you can actually see a genuine person behind it.

My only critique, it's a bit too much info I don't need to know for nsa fun. Also one more pic showing some flesh would be good.

Finally and you asked to compare the two profiles! It's interesting that on your couple profile you're into safe sex while on your single one you're not!!!!

"
have you a degree in people's profile.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Well done Sir1967. I tried to be funny on mine but I don't think I got it across.

Good luck

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


" Would love some feedback whether I met the appropriate tone and whether the reader considers it in sync with the couple profile of ours.

Excellent! Can't wait to entertain you and the hotwife. There'll be no overcooked vegetables or instant coffee, I promise.

Now, put an 'e' on that 'profile' and it'll be perfect.. well, you did ask! "

OMG...I assume the spelling errors has sneaked in as I jump between three languages, however the error has been fixed. My German perfectionism is shatteted

Hope to meet you soon

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"The profile portrays a picture of your personality (appealing or not to the observer is depending on the individual). Hence it's a good profile because you can actually see a genuine person behind it.

My only critique, it's a bit too much info I don't need to know for nsa fun. Also one more pic showing some flesh would be good.

Finally and you asked to compare the two profiles! It's interesting that on your couple profile you're into safe sex while on your single one you're not!!!!

"

The safe sex note has been added in the post scriptum . Thanks for pointing it out

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By *oghunter33Woman
over a year ago

on the hill NordWest of


"The profile portrays a picture of your personality (appealing or not to the observer is depending on the individual). Hence it's a good profile because you can actually see a genuine person behind it.

My only critique, it's a bit too much info I don't need to know for nsa fun. Also one more pic showing some flesh would be good.

Finally and you asked to compare the two profiles! It's interesting that on your couple profile you're into safe sex while on your single one you're not!!!!

The safe sex note has been added in the post scriptum . Thanks for pointing it out"

You're welcome! The devil is in the detail!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Great profile and an even better response and feedback from site members...would anyone care to glance at mine and give some constructive criticism?

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By *ardy cowboyMan
over a year ago

every wheat field around Midlands


"Great profile and an even better response and feedback from site members...would anyone care to glance at mine and give some constructive criticism?"
to long.shorten it I say.people haven't the time to read essays lol.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Great profile and an even better response and feedback from site members...would anyone care to glance at mine and give some constructive criticism?"

I think it is good. If any gents consider it to long...well I guess they are not your targeted audience, right?

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By *-ManMan
over a year ago

Kark


"Great profile and an even better response and feedback from site members...would anyone care to glance at mine and give some constructive criticism?"

I can't see anything wrong with it mate, maybe try and get a bit of humour in.

I'm also straight but I'd say the ladies might like to see a pic from behind

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By *randub69Man
over a year ago

city

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Great profile and an even better response and feedback from site members...would anyone care to glance at mine and give some constructive criticism?"

Cool, I would say good profile n great pics x happy hunting

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By *randub69Man
over a year ago

city


"Hi folks

I created myself a single profile at sir1967. Would love some feedback whether I met the appropriate tone and whether the reader considers it in sync with the couple profile of ours.

Thanks

Sir1967"

I don't know you,but iam sure your a lovely guy..but reading your profile,I found myself reading it in a Stephen Fry accent and picturing a stately home in the background and thinking, this guy sounds like a pompous oul fart.

I think the profile is a little on the long side, and if you were not already on here as part of a couple,but as a genuine single guy,the lady's would probably not bother reading the whole of your profile because of its length.

well you did ask

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Hi folks

I created myself a single profile at sir1967. Would love some feedback whether I met the appropriate tone and whether the reader considers it in sync with the couple profile of ours.

Thanks

Sir1967

I don't know you,but iam sure your a lovely guy..but reading your profile,I found myself reading it in a Stephen Fry accent and picturing a stately home in the background and thinking, this guy sounds like a pompous oul fart.

I think the profile is a little on the long side, and if you were not already on here as part of a couple,but as a genuine single guy,the lady's would probably not bother reading the whole of your profile because of its length.

well you did ask "

Haha...well to be honest...yes I am somewhat a snob...but a very social one

Whether the profile is too long for the female audience...time will tell. However, since ladies are reacting less visual focused than men I considered words the better way to reach their minds rather then pics in whatever explicit form. Over the years I learned that the way into the arms of a lady goes over her mind and then all other senses

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Words give a much better picture than a photo ever will. Well written. I like it.

Oh and having high standards doesn't make you a snob. It's actually more appealing to us if people have high standards in regards of personality.

Good job

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