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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Summer fades, leaves fall,

Covid stays, refuses to stall ,

I wish we could fuck.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

A morning horn

It might have been useful

But now it is gone

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"A morning horn

It might have been useful

But now it is gone"

Yours is better.

The haiku, not the horn.

(although - I'm only hitting 4 in the first line, and 6 in the 2nd?!)

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By *ubcouple99Couple
over a year ago

dublin

Our life on fab

Is it over

in mid swing

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By *ubcouple99Couple
over a year ago

dublin

Had to google what a haiku was lol hope this was a good first attempt

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Had to google what a haiku was lol hope this was a good first attempt "

All first attempts are good attempts!

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By *ubcouple99Couple
over a year ago

dublin

Thank you sir

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By *ublinGirl92Woman
over a year ago

Hell

Asking for too much

Deplorable men of fab

Always annoying

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Haikus are easy

But they don't always make sense

Pencil sharpener

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

He whispers to me

My every nerve happy that

I obey his lips

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

A haiku about getting out of bed:

No no no no no

No no no no no no no

No no no no no

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"He whispers to me

My every nerve happy that

I obey his lips"

Mmmmm.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Asking for too much

Deplorable men of fab

Always annoying

"

Love it!

Still 6 on the 2nd though?

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By *ublinGirl92Woman
over a year ago

Hell


"Asking for too much

Deplorable men of fab

Always annoying

Love it!

Still 6 on the 2nd though? "

How? 4 syllable word followed by 3 1 syllable words. It's 5,7,5.

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By *ealitybitesMan
over a year ago

Belfast

That is why you fail

Judge me by my size do you

Wars not make one great.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Kaizer loves a good haiku

Ring ring goes the bell

It's a hot ass lady

She's probably lost

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By *ealitybitesMan
over a year ago

Belfast


"Asking for too much

Deplorable men of fab

Always annoying

Love it!

Still 6 on the 2nd though?

How? 4 syllable word followed by 3 1 syllable words. It's 5,7,5."

Deplorable is only 3 syllables though.

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By *ublinGirl92Woman
over a year ago

Hell


"Asking for too much

Deplorable men of fab

Always annoying

Love it!

Still 6 on the 2nd though?

How? 4 syllable word followed by 3 1 syllable words. It's 5,7,5.

Deplorable is only 3 syllables though. "

It's definitely 4 syllables.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Asking for too much

Deplorable men of fab

Always annoying

Love it!

Still 6 on the 2nd though?

How? 4 syllable word followed by 3 1 syllable words. It's 5,7,5.

Deplorable is only 3 syllables though.

It's definitely 4 syllables."

I stand corrected and humbly apologise - it is indeed four syllables.... Well done!

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By *ealitybitesMan
over a year ago

Belfast


"Asking for too much

Deplorable men of fab

Always annoying

Love it!

Still 6 on the 2nd though?

How? 4 syllable word followed by 3 1 syllable words. It's 5,7,5.

Deplorable is only 3 syllables though.

It's definitely 4 syllables."

I'll take it back. Depends on how you say it. Up here it's probably only 2

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

If your diction fails

Do not worry about it

Here's an abacus

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By *ublinGirl92Woman
over a year ago

Hell


"Asking for too much

Deplorable men of fab

Always annoying

Love it!

Still 6 on the 2nd though?

How? 4 syllable word followed by 3 1 syllable words. It's 5,7,5.

Deplorable is only 3 syllables though.

It's definitely 4 syllables.

I stand corrected and humbly apologise - it is indeed four syllables.... Well done! "

Why thank you good sir

I feel vindicated now

My perfect haiku

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

a lightning flash

over the roaring ocean

I play with my cock

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"a lightning flash

over the roaring ocean

I play with my cock

"

Bravo!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Asking for too much

Deplorable men of fab

Always annoying

Love it!

Still 6 on the 2nd though?

How? 4 syllable word followed by 3 1 syllable words. It's 5,7,5.

Deplorable is only 3 syllables though.

It's definitely 4 syllables.

I stand corrected and humbly apologise - it is indeed four syllables.... Well done!

Why thank you good sir

I feel vindicated now

My perfect haiku

"

This

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