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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Updated my profile to take things a little more seriously. I would love some feedback on improving it if anyone has any pointers.

Young white guy from east London. Although I do occasionally travel to Manchester for a week at a time.

Hey

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By *r_Jake70Man
over a year ago

London

It reads like many a woman’s profile (all the stuff about unsolicited friend requests, and deleting messages). You’d be so lucky! It’s totally unnecessary, and makes you sound as if you’re inundated, which as a bloke you’re not. So it just comes across as cocky. You also sound really entitled. Again not a good stance to take. I’d give it another go if I was you.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I agree with the comment above.

No need to sound so insatiable and irresistible.

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By *istress-MazikeenWoman
over a year ago

bolton

Not a profile I would be interested in as there is nothing about yourself or what you can offer women.

The profile needs to make you stand out and the first lines stop that.

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By *r_Jake70Man
over a year ago

London

You’ve forgotten to add “unless you want me to” after the bit about biting. That’s pretty much obligatory.

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By *eroLondonMan
over a year ago

Mayfair


"It reads like many a woman’s profile (all the stuff about unsolicited friend requests, and deleting messages). You’d be so lucky! It’s totally unnecessary, and makes you sound as if you’re inundated, which as a bloke you’re not. So it just comes across as cocky. You also sound really entitled. Again not a good stance to take. I’d give it another go if I was you. "

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Completely agree.

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By *llNatural36FWoman
over a year ago

Denbighshire

There's not much of a profile to comment about, it really tells me next to nothing and the biting but just makes me cringe. I wouldn't look twice at your profile if I was looking for your area etc

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By *sm265Woman
over a year ago

Shangri-la

It says very little about who you are as a person or what you can offer someone. You sound cocky, verging on arrogant, the biting thing is cringe worthy, some of the pics are OK but the fleshlight one & dick pic would put me off.

The fact you're willing to meet anyone from 18-99 suggests you're really not fussy.

It's a profile I'd look at & think "No thanks" & move on.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Current status is a put off.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

And just like that - he's gone.

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