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By *rof_cpl OP   Couple
over a year ago

Gerrards Cross

We finally got round to writing a proper profile after being on here for 4 years

We'd really appreciate it if a couple of people could take a look at it and let us know if we've got the tone right.

This is mainly a question for couples and unicorns, because that's who it's really aimed at, but guys if you want to take a look and give us a critique then do your worst!

Thanks.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

You have been here 4 years its a bit bloody late to start asking now isn't it?

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By *good-being-badMan
over a year ago

mis-types and auto corrects leads cock leeds

I'm not your target audience, they might think differently , I got no sense of your personality, its a pretty long profile and nope nothing .. couples and dingle ladies may like it, if you're happy with it it makes no difference what others think.

My suggestions to all who ask.

The profile should inform others of your wants desires and what you offer ..it should try to interest and entice the reader with the words and pictures.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I looked, its a lot of text.

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By *en100Man
over a year ago

wymondham

I quite liked the essay ??

Friendly and honest which comes across well (giggity)

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By *rcadian110Couple
over a year ago

Barnsley

Good fun tone, clear preferences and good pics . It's clear your dedicated to each other. I like it. We had the same issue not knowing how ours is perceived

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By *rof_cpl OP   Couple
over a year ago

Gerrards Cross

Thanks everybody. We'll have to shorten it a bit

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

It's just our opinion,but we thought it was nice that your profile was well thought and and had a lot of information in it.it would definitely be a bonus to us both as we can gauge your personalities better because of it.we wouldn't change it but that's just us.plus your pics are amazing so of course we are biased lol

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I'm a unicorn and I like it. The only bit I didn't was the "what we're not into" I appreciate it eliminates timewasters but I'm sure you could just use discretion on that part. All in all it's a nice profile x

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By *olden_Road_to_SamarkandMan
over a year ago

North Wessex Downs Ares

First class profile - you sound keen and sensible and not just sex mad lunes! The 'normal' photo that you've wisely blurred as well - those snaps of people enjoying themselves in normal places are super hot.

Length looks fine to me too - but then again I'm biased .. LOL

10 out of 10 profile IMHO!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I'm not who you are looking for but you have been clear what you want and what you don't . Your photos are great and you come across as sane and sensible. Looks good to me!

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By *tephTV67TV/TS
over a year ago

Cheshire

Photos are out of date now, need to get some more. But it looks like you're aware of that, with your recent status.

I like your profile, good idea to put down future dates (I may nick it)

You come across well, I always think a couple's profile should be a little longer as there is two of you after all

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By *wist my nipplesCouple
over a year ago

North East Scotland, mostly

Your plans appear to relate to a different year?

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By *allySlinkyWoman
over a year ago

Leeds

I think your photos need updating

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By *allySlinkyWoman
over a year ago

Leeds


"Your plans appear to relate to a different year?"

Well spotted !

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By *LIRTWITHUSCouple
over a year ago

Chester

Not very updated

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