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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

As per title, I'd love some feedback on my profile and how I can improve it.

Thank you in advance! =)

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By *adeiteWoman
over a year ago

Stafford

The fact you're straight but have met a man will put some off.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Your profile comes across as arrogant and all about you. What have you got to offer? Also agree with the comment about your 'straight' status but veri from a guy may put people off

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Thanks guys! Didn't realise I was set to straight and I'll try to sound less arrogant!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Leave it exactly how you like it! Then people will know exactly what they are getting

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By *etite HandfulWoman
over a year ago

Chester

420 friendly just puts me off and I would presume many others.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Thanks, great feedback folks!

Really great to hear from you, thank you for taking the time to read through.

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By *ycallMan
over a year ago

Dorking

You picture 20 March 2019 made me giggle.

I would personally say have a few less pictures of your little man and possibly reduce the length of your profile text whilst keeping the important information and showing your personality.

Not sure about the “dick is everywhere chemistry isn’t” part. It doesn’t really fit with the rest of the text and being someone with a scientific mind I would say chemistry is more abundant than cock. It drives nearly every process in our lives.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Drug references are very off putting. Do not need more than one cock pic.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Cool, made some changes with all your great advice. Work in progress!

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By *he Secret Tea PartyCouple
over a year ago

London

First couple of lines had me stopping reading.

Cock pics aren't necessary.

KM

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

At least he out some effort into his profile

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Looks ok and it seems you have taken some advice. If only all people asking help took notice like you.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

You look lovely in stockings OP!

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By *sGivesWoodWoman
over a year ago

ST. AUSTELL, CORNWALL


"You look lovely in stockings OP! "

Indeed

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By *sGivesWoodWoman
over a year ago

ST. AUSTELL, CORNWALL

If it reflects who you really are, don't change a thing. There's advice on mine should you wish to use it. Good luck.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Very arrogant profile and too many dick pictures. Doesn't give impression of respect when you mention 'fuck toys' in the headline! What woman wants to be a toy to any man!

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By *r_Jake70Man
over a year ago

London


"If it reflects who you really are, don't change a thing. There's advice on mine should you wish to use it. Good luck. "

I’ve only just seen this, so haven’t caught the refinement, but here’s a few observations....

Despite your statement to the contrary, this really does come across as a tad arrogant. Lots about how wonderful you are, and not much about what you can bring to the table.

The thinly veiled reference to drugs isn’t going to fool anyone. If it’s important to you then keep it in, but why not just wait until you are chatting to someone. Also, if you smoke then you are a smoker. Don’t hide it in order to cast your net wider.

Who cares what your name isn’t? Lots of people use pseudonyms.

The text at the bottom is sub 50 Shades rubbish. If you’re proud of it then I’d keep it to yourself.

Very few women look at winks. If fact the most likely reason for any woman to look at your statement in the first place is if you have messaged them.

The whole thing needs further retuning and. distillation. Or just leave it as it is and allow it to reflect your true personality

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By *tephTV67TV/TS
over a year ago

Cheshire

'My greatest pleasure is that of pleasuring others' cringe

How many guys stick that on their profile, I say bollocks

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By *ilkenWoman
over a year ago

Manchester

Arrogance is in the text and the pictures are very average it will appeal to some but put just as many off.

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