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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

ladies and gentlemen thank you in advance for any hints and tips x

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By *allySlinkyWoman
over a year ago

Leeds

I find the mix of "she" and "I" confusing

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Thank you for taking the time to look and for your feedback x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"I find the mix of "she" and "I" confusing"

I agree with this. I personally would ditch 'she' and replace with I throughout.

It would read as more confident and less disjointed. The swap from one to the other is a little jarring.

Your pics are great!

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Thank you for appreciation of my pictures and taking the time to read my profile. Haven taken the feedback constructively and amended appropriately

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By *tephTV67TV/TS
over a year ago

Cheshire

Very rare for a lady to ask for hints, normally just guys as they're struggling on here. However there is very little that needs improvement, you have stated your preferences, would you consider anyone else who messaged you outside of them ?

But in all honesty, you'll get those chancers anyway.

You could teach a few on here how to write a decent Profile, so nothing really, good luck

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By *allySlinkyWoman
over a year ago

Leeds

If I'm being really picky the first word in your profile needs a capital L to match the others.

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