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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Hey folks,

Just posting on here to ask if anyone would be kind enough to give their thoughts on my profile, as I've just rewritten it.

I wonder if it may not read more like a dating profile than anything.

Regarding pictures or lack thereof, I will be making a point to add more, I just lack ideas, so suggestions welcome!

Much obliged,

Ozi.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I like it. It would get my attention anyway as it is different enough from the norm on here.

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By *aisy SteinerWoman
over a year ago

Leicester

It's good, you're clear about what you want and need ..

It's far better than the "just ask" I see a lot of.

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By *tingly ByronMan
over a year ago

In a town Fab forgot

It's a good profile, damn you.

The only thing it's lacks you already know and are addressing.

Good luck chap.

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By *tephTV67TV/TS
over a year ago

Cheshire

Smoking will put some women off, but not all.

However your biggest issues are where you live and the age ranges.

I had to Google your town, near Perth in Scotland, how many women in that area between 20-40 who wouldn't mind meeting a smoker and are actually on here ?

You could have the best written Profile on this site but it can also come down to availablity, if you lived in central London you'd have a better chance but I have an awful feeling you're going to struggle.

I'd suggest opening those age ranges and wherever possible getting to a club or social.

Apart from that, the profile is certainly better than most

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Very nice profile

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