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By *harismatic Enigma OP   Man
over a year ago

leeds

Hi I’m F 32 from Leeds back on here again after a few years away, I’ve seen a few posts on here asking for advice on their profile and thought I would do the same any feedback is welcome and appreciated, because there’s alway room for improvement

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By *ohnjones3210Man
over a year ago

Chester

I read up until "I'm smart, intelligent and good looking" then lost interest.

Your sitting down in the waistcoat pic is good. The rest not so good.

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By *harismatic Enigma OP   Man
over a year ago

leeds


"I read up until "I'm smart, intelligent and good looking" then lost interest.

Your sitting down in the waistcoat pic is good. The rest not so good.

"

Thanks noted

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

It might be a problem if you can't accommodate but your pics are good, and your text reads well to me xx

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By *riendly older leggy wifeCouple
over a year ago

london

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By *harismatic Enigma OP   Man
over a year ago

leeds


"It might be a problem if you can't accommodate but your pics are good, and your text reads well to me xx"

Thanks

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By *tephTV67TV/TS
over a year ago

Cheshire

It's ok, just nothing special.

The picture with the waistcoat is very good, but as a biker, don't wear the jacket without at least standing next to a motorbike

It's very generic, better than a lot of profiles, as some guys just have a couple of lines of text but you really need to stand out on here.

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By *harismatic Enigma OP   Man
over a year ago

leeds


"It's ok, just nothing special.

The picture with the waistcoat is very good, but as a biker, don't wear the jacket without at least standing next to a motorbike

It's very generic, better than a lot of profiles, as some guys just have a couple of lines of text but you really need to stand out on here. "

Stand out ? any suggestions?

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By *winkleFairyCouple
over a year ago

UK

In your 30s and can’t accommodate with cause some people to question your single status.

It’s definitely not a bad profile, I’ve seen much much worse. I’d suggest trying to inject a little personality into the text as it’s pretty generic at the moment

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By *tephTV67TV/TS
over a year ago

Cheshire


"It's ok, just nothing special.

The picture with the waistcoat is very good, but as a biker, don't wear the jacket without at least standing next to a motorbike

It's very generic, better than a lot of profiles, as some guys just have a couple of lines of text but you really need to stand out on here.

Stand out ? any suggestions? "

I put this on another guy who asked for help with their profile...

Not long ago, a thread appeared just like yours asking for feedback and what I read was brilliant, and quite a few Women agreed and certainly were interested in him afterwards it was as simple as a poem, nothing amazing just a simple poem, that was informative but also funny. Immediately you knew he was intelligent, self deprecating and had a great sense of humour

When I say stand out, this guy stood out with his poem

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By *harismatic Enigma OP   Man
over a year ago

leeds


"In your 30s and can’t accommodate with cause some people to question your single status.

It’s definitely not a bad profile, I’ve seen much much worse. I’d suggest trying to inject a little personality into the text as it’s pretty generic at the moment "

I get where you coming thanks

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By *ollydoesWoman
over a year ago

Shangri-La

The only thing that would out me off is being in your 30s and cant accomadate. I would usually take that to mean your not single. If that's the case better to he up front about it.

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By *harismatic Enigma OP   Man
over a year ago

leeds


"The only thing that would out me off is being in your 30s and cant accomadate. I would usually take that to mean your not single. If that's the case better to he up front about it. "

I am but due a previous relationship ending I’ve had move back in with family don’t they would appreciate random people coming over lol

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By *adame 2SwordsWoman
over a year ago

Victoria, London

What questions have women been asking about you? Then incorporate them into your profile

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By *harismatic Enigma OP   Man
over a year ago

leeds


"What questions have women been asking about you? Then incorporate them into your profile"

Not had any questions

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By *harismatic Enigma OP   Man
over a year ago

leeds

Suggestions taken on board done a rewrite, what guys think of it now ?

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By *ohnjones3210Man
over a year ago

Chester


"Suggestions taken on board done a rewrite, what guys think of it now ? "

Hello!

I'd change title, change age range, get rid of eyes pic and club pic. It portrays that you think highly of yourself. Maybe get a second opinion on that though.

The profile is a lot better.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"I read up until "I'm smart, intelligent and good looking" then lost interest.

Your sitting down in the waistcoat pic is good. The rest not so good.

"

Funny enough I commented on someone else's thread about them mentioning being smart and intelligent and they didn't take it quite well glad I'm not the only one who reacts in the same way after reading this in a profile...

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By *ohnjones3210Man
over a year ago

Chester


"I read up until "I'm smart, intelligent and good looking" then lost interest.

Your sitting down in the waistcoat pic is good. The rest not so good.

Funny enough I commented on someone else's thread about them mentioning being smart and intelligent and they didn't take it quite well glad I'm not the only one who reacts in the same way after reading this in a profile..."

Yeah, it just doesn't sit well. Self proclaimed intelligence, etc

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"I read up until "I'm smart, intelligent and good looking" then lost interest.

Your sitting down in the waistcoat pic is good. The rest not so good.

Funny enough I commented on someone else's thread about them mentioning being smart and intelligent and they didn't take it quite well glad I'm not the only one who reacts in the same way after reading this in a profile...

Yeah, it just doesn't sit well. Self proclaimed intelligence, etc"

indeed. I've been tested by Mensa but I don't brag about it

Good luck to those who need to put something like that in their profile.

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By *harismatic Enigma OP   Man
over a year ago

leeds

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By *harismatic Enigma OP   Man
over a year ago

leeds


"I read up until "I'm smart, intelligent and good looking" then lost interest.

Your sitting down in the waistcoat pic is good. The rest not so good.

Funny enough I commented on someone else's thread about them mentioning being smart and intelligent and they didn't take it quite well glad I'm not the only one who reacts in the same way after reading this in a profile...

Yeah, it just doesn't sit well. Self proclaimed intelligence, etc

indeed. I've been tested by Mensa but I don't brag about it

Good luck to those who need to put something like that in their profile."

Well I’m after critical feedback and I don’t get offended easily

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By *harismatic Enigma OP   Man
over a year ago

leeds


"Suggestions taken on board done a rewrite, what guys think of it now ?

Hello!

I'd change title, change age range, get rid of eyes pic and club pic. It portrays that you think highly of yourself. Maybe get a second opinion on that though.

The profile is a lot better."

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By *ollydoesWoman
over a year ago

Shangri-La


"The only thing that would out me off is being in your 30s and cant accomadate. I would usually take that to mean your not single. If that's the case better to he up front about it.

I am but due a previous relationship ending I’ve had move back in with family don’t they would appreciate random people coming over lol "

Thsts understandable lol maybe wanna mention you cant.accomadate where you are, dont have to say back with mum thi no shame in it all.

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By *ollydoesWoman
over a year ago

Shangri-La


"Suggestions taken on board done a rewrite, what guys think of it now ?

Hello!

I'd change title, change age range, get rid of eyes pic and club pic. It portrays that you think highly of yourself. Maybe get a second opinion on that though.

The profile is a lot better. "

Personally dont see the problem you saying your intelligent, some folks say they funny, got a big dick, are great at oral..dont see the difference..

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By *harismatic Enigma OP   Man
over a year ago

leeds


"The only thing that would out me off is being in your 30s and cant accomadate. I would usually take that to mean your not single. If that's the case better to he up front about it.

I am but due a previous relationship ending I’ve had move back in with family don’t they would appreciate random people coming over lol

Thsts understandable lol maybe wanna mention you cant.accomadate where you are, dont have to say back with mum thi no shame in it all. "

I have ta x

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By *harismatic Enigma OP   Man
over a year ago

leeds


"In your 30s and can’t accommodate with cause some people to question your single status.

It’s definitely not a bad profile, I’ve seen much much worse. I’d suggest trying to inject a little personality into the text as it’s pretty generic at the moment "

I get what you mean added abit of personality to

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

looks o.k to me

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By *harismatic Enigma OP   Man
over a year ago

leeds


"looks o.k to me "

Cheers

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By *euschMan
over a year ago

peterborough

Why does your profile say you are F when you are quite clearly M?

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By *allySlinkyWoman
over a year ago

Leeds


"Why does your profile say you are F when you are quite clearly M? "

F is the first letter of his name. I agree it is confusing. When I saw his post saying F32 I thought he was a woman

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By *harismatic Enigma OP   Man
over a year ago

leeds


"Why does your profile say you are F when you are quite clearly M?

F is the first letter of his name. I agree it is confusing. When I saw his post saying F32 I thought he was a woman "

I get what you mean lol done a few rewrites and tweaks

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