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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Can anyone help me out by checking out my profile and giving me some advice good or bad i dont mind and im not gunna kick off over negative stuff i just want some pointers on it please

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I'd get rid of the photos where your arms are up, but arse facing the camera.

Your text is good, I'd leave out the big girls and ebony girls bit though. If that's what you like, then you can search for them yourself.

All in all, not a bad effort in my opinion, better than most.

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By *ara JTV/TS
over a year ago

Bristol East

It reads fine.

Only observation I'd make is that some of your pictures send out a message you are submissive.

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By *revaunanceCouple
over a year ago

Exeter

Personally I'd lose the first line. There is no point referring to an account that does not exist.

You might also want to reword the last two lines as well:

"Im on both kik and watsapp so if u want them again just ask

I have kik too look for stretchmkenzie87"

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By *ana_nana_MATTMAN!Man
over a year ago

Haywood Village, Weston-super-Mare

I think the first thing you need to do, is check the spelling, grammar, and punctuation. It's quite difficult to read in places, and looks rushed. This might give some people the impression that you are lazy, or not really bothered.

The second thing would be to take some new photos. It's good that you're willing to put your face out there, that will help you, but the ones you have up aren't as flattering as they could be.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"I think the first thing you need to do, is check the spelling, grammar, and punctuation. It's quite difficult to read in places, and looks rushed. This might give some people the impression that you are lazy, or not really bothered.

The second thing would be to take some new photos. It's good that you're willing to put your face out there, that will help you, but the ones you have up aren't as flattering as they could be."
thanks for the advice mate i was afraid id get heckled at lol i shall try my best to correct it

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Re wrote it now hopefully that reads alot better thank you all for the advice could you please check it out and let me know how it looks ill be taking some decent pics in the morning too

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By *ana_nana_MATTMAN!Man
over a year ago

Haywood Village, Weston-super-Mare


"Re wrote it now hopefully that reads alot better thank you all for the advice could you please check it out and let me know how it looks ill be taking some decent pics in the morning too "

Much better. Although, I would be careful about using phrases like 'date' and 'connecting on an emotional level', it sounds more like you're seeking a proper relationship rather that a fwb. Perhaps change 'date' to 'meet', and 'personal level', rather than 'emotional level'.

Other than that, good job.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Cheers will make the changes really dude i appreciate the help

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By *ana_nana_MATTMAN!Man
over a year ago

Haywood Village, Weston-super-Mare


"Cheers will make the changes really dude i appreciate the help "

No problemo

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Hopefully that clears up things now to get better pics lol

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By *etite HandfulWoman
over a year ago

Chester

Better without the beard in my honest opinion.

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By *llNatural36FWoman
over a year ago

Denbighshire

Your profile reads like you do want a relationship op, a very relaxed one but I think you could be blurring the lines here. Have a think and be honest with yourself then look at the profile and if you think it's you to a T then cool keep it, if not then change it. Good luck

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Better without the beard in my honest opinion."

I'll take that lol im getting my hair cut later so could always add a shave thanks

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By *ngelina4uWoman
over a year ago

Camberley/Middleton

There are worse profiles on here just keep improving it as you go along.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

As said before, ur pics and text don't seem to marry up. Ur pics paint a picture of submission which doesn't seem to be mentioned in ur profile text. Mate, if that's ur thing, then be honest about it. It's all good.

I don't see anything wrong with ur profile, it seems honest and well meant. Get some new pics would be my advice. Good luck

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Thanks to you all ill try and improve on what has been said and try to make it sound more sensible lol all i can do is ask for advice and work on it

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By *eal_curves_is_backWoman
over a year ago

London

Punctuation and sentences.

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