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By *isterCheshire OP   Man
over a year ago

Playa Del Ingles

Hi all,

I’ve updated my profile and would appreciate some feedback from females and couples only please. I have quite a mixed reaction so any feedback will be useful.

TIA

MisterCheshire

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Change the font to Arial and sit back and wait.

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By *naswingdressWoman
over a year ago

Manchester (she/her)

Profile text better than average.

I'd work on photos, clearer and more varied.

Your header has been corrupted, rewrite without special characters.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Sorry it said females and couples only, so men no need to comment, I repeat no need to comment.

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By *isaB45Woman
over a year ago

Fabville

Nice smiley pic

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By *rivateparts!Man
over a year ago

Walking down the only road I've ever known!


"Sorry it said females and couples only, so men no need to comment, I repeat no need to comment. "

Well that's sexist.

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By *isterCheshire OP   Man
over a year ago

Playa Del Ingles

Header amended. I think this was down to the ampersand. Weird!

Yes totally agree with pictures, definitely need more. Looking at doing some this week.

I only requested females and couples as that’s who I’m looking to meet, so the actual content will appeal to them rather than a guys as singles or couples

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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago

There and to the left a bit

Know you said couples and females only (which in itself leads me to wonder if this is just a "look at me" post - especially given you're well and recently verified) but sometimes a male perspective can help too you know

It's actually pretty good for the most part, and the number of verifications indicate that not much needs changing - might help though to define what you consider "vanilla" and what your fetishes and kinks are - what may be vanilla, kinky or a fetish to one person may be completely different to another.

The "whichever gets your pussy hungry for my 8in cock" line may be seen by some as being a little arrogant so maybe reword or remove it.

As I said though - the recent veris suggests that Fab is working for you, so probably not a great deal of change needed

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By *isterCheshire OP   Man
over a year ago

Playa Del Ingles

Your profile says you aren’t looking for single guys. I’m offended!

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By *naswingdressWoman
over a year ago

Manchester (she/her)


"Header amended. I think this was down to the ampersand. Weird!

Yes totally agree with pictures, definitely need more. Looking at doing some this week.

I only requested females and couples as that’s who I’m looking to meet, so the actual content will appeal to them rather than a guys as singles or couples "

(Successful) guys will often have a better idea of what appeals to women and couples generally. I can only tell you what I like.

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By *naswingdressWoman
over a year ago

Manchester (she/her)

And I'd agree with Gemini Man (as I often do). Cock bragging is so passé.

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By *ady LickWoman
over a year ago

Northampton Somewhere

Nice pics, humorous text, I can't help thinking to myself 'Roll up, roll up', but it's better than most!!

Good luck

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By *sGivesWoodWoman
over a year ago

ST. AUSTELL, CORNWALL


"And I'd agree with Gemini Man (as I often do). Cock bragging is so passé. "

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By *rumpyMcFuckNuggetMan
over a year ago

Den of Iniquity


"And I'd agree with Gemini Man (as I often do). Cock bragging is so passé. "
You have gorgeous skin and your legs are to die for . Text is forthright and honest . I love that you love bi guys . So no criticism here

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By *r.BlondeMan
over a year ago

Chester/Wirral

Gimme all you got!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Looks fine to me. Pics will decide initial attraction, your text is clear so yes I'm sure if they like you they will respond

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I think u will get offers from millions to bang them likeca trooper

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Your Headline is a bit wordy rather than snappy- it doesn't exactly roll off the tongue.

Your most recent picture is a bit grainy so I would remove/replace it.

I think your pictures are fine but a bit dull as they are basically the same pose, with/without light flare and pants. Maybe a full length one showing off your bum would be nice?

You have spelled "responded to" incorrectly as well.

Other than that, it's clear what you want and how you play- and obviously works for you.

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By *isterCheshire OP   Man
over a year ago

Playa Del Ingles

Sure totally get why it may seem that way, but as mentioned above, I want my profile to appeal to couples and single females. But all feedback is appreciated.

I’ve only used the forums to look at events and it was only when I chatted to a friend at an event on Saturday and she commented that my profile doesn’t do me justice, so it led me here for impartial and unbiased feedback from people who don’t know me. First impressions and all that.

All veris are from people I’ve met in clubs so it was just to ramp up this first point of contact really.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

U had 6 meets in 3 months what u stressing for

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By *isterCheshire OP   Man
over a year ago

Playa Del Ingles


"U had 6 meets in 3 months what u stressing for "

True, but they are all club meets. Sometimes it’s good to have the option of a random midweek meet.

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By *anky_PankyWoman
over a year ago

Filthy Fuckeryville


"Sure totally get why it may seem that way, but as mentioned above, I want my profile to appeal to couples and single females. But all feedback is appreciated.

I’ve only used the forums to look at events and it was only when I chatted to a friend at an event on Saturday and she commented that my profile doesn’t do me justice, so it led me here for impartial and unbiased feedback from people who don’t know me. First impressions and all that.

All veris are from people I’ve met in clubs so it was just to ramp up this first point of contact really.

"

Makes total sense!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Sure totally get why it may seem that way, but as mentioned above, I want my profile to appeal to couples and single females. But all feedback is appreciated.

I’ve only used the forums to look at events and it was only when I chatted to a friend at an event on Saturday and she commented that my profile doesn’t do me justice, so it led me here for impartial and unbiased feedback from people who don’t know me. First impressions and all that.

All veris are from people I’ve met in clubs so it was just to ramp up this first point of contact really.

"

I hope I haven't offended- I hope I offered constructive criticism

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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago

There and to the left a bit


"Sure totally get why it may seem that way, but as mentioned above, I want my profile to appeal to couples and single females. But all feedback is appreciated.

I’ve only used the forums to look at events and it was only when I chatted to a friend at an event on Saturday and she commented that my profile doesn’t do me justice, so it led me here for impartial and unbiased feedback from people who don’t know me. First impressions and all that.

All veris are from people I’ve met in clubs so it was just to ramp up this first point of contact really.

I hope I haven't offended- I hope I offered constructive criticism "

I think it was aimed at me and I certainly didn't take it as I'd offended - and your criticism was both constructive and bang on the mark.

See what happens when you don't use the reply and quote button OP - people get paranoid

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By *tirluvMan
over a year ago

the right frame of mind -London

Op -what exactly is a mixed reaction (in the sense that you own one that is)?

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By *iamondCougarWoman
over a year ago

Norfuck! / Lincolnshire


"Know you said couples and females only (which in itself leads me to wonder if this is just a "look at me" post - especially given you're well and recently verified) but sometimes a male perspective can help too you know

It's actually pretty good for the most part, and the number of verifications indicate that not much needs changing - might help though to define what you consider "vanilla" and what your fetishes and kinks are - what may be vanilla, kinky or a fetish to one person may be completely different to another.

The "whichever gets your pussy hungry for my 8in cock" line may be seen by some as being a little arrogant so maybe reword or remove it.

As I said though - the recent veris suggests that Fab is working for you, so probably not a great deal of change needed "

I’d agree with this.... more clarification needed on your idea of beyond vanilla. You might also consider variation in your choice of pics. Cock pics just don’t float the boat for most females... myself included.

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By *isterCheshire OP   Man
over a year ago

Playa Del Ingles


"Sure totally get why it may seem that way, but as mentioned above, I want my profile to appeal to couples and single females. But all feedback is appreciated.

I’ve only used the forums to look at events and it was only when I chatted to a friend at an event on Saturday and she commented that my profile doesn’t do me justice, so it led me here for impartial and unbiased feedback from people who don’t know me. First impressions and all that.

All veris are from people I’ve met in clubs so it was just to ramp up this first point of contact really.

I hope I haven't offended- I hope I offered constructive criticism

I think it was aimed at me and I certainly didn't take it as I'd offended - and your criticism was both constructive and bang on the mark.

See what happens when you don't use the reply and quote button OP - people get paranoid "

My fault here clicking reply and not quite reply!

Apologies all! As you can tell, I don’t tend to use these forums much.

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By *isterCheshire OP   Man
over a year ago

Playa Del Ingles


"Know you said couples and females only (which in itself leads me to wonder if this is just a "look at me" post - especially given you're well and recently verified) but sometimes a male perspective can help too you know

It's actually pretty good for the most part, and the number of verifications indicate that not much needs changing - might help though to define what you consider "vanilla" and what your fetishes and kinks are - what may be vanilla, kinky or a fetish to one person may be completely different to another.

The "whichever gets your pussy hungry for my 8in cock" line may be seen by some as being a little arrogant so maybe reword or remove it.

As I said though - the recent veris suggests that Fab is working for you, so probably not a great deal of change needed

I’d agree with this.... more clarification needed on your idea of beyond vanilla. You might also consider variation in your choice of pics. Cock pics just don’t float the boat for most females... myself included. "

Thank you, definitely more variation required. That seems the common consensus. I’m actually against posting full on cock shots, yesterday’s picture was the only one I’ve posted I think.

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By *isterCheshire OP   Man
over a year ago

Playa Del Ingles


"Sure totally get why it may seem that way, but as mentioned above, I want my profile to appeal to couples and single females. But all feedback is appreciated.

I’ve only used the forums to look at events and it was only when I chatted to a friend at an event on Saturday and she commented that my profile doesn’t do me justice, so it led me here for impartial and unbiased feedback from people who don’t know me. First impressions and all that.

All veris are from people I’ve met in clubs so it was just to ramp up this first point of contact really.

I hope I haven't offended- I hope I offered constructive criticism "

And that’s the way I took it, no offence taken

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

It looks ok OP take no notice of the idiots who try to be clever rather than helpful they are epic failures so just do the opposite of them and you will be fine.

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By *isterCheshire OP   Man
over a year ago

Playa Del Ingles


"It looks ok OP take no notice of the idiots who try to be clever rather than helpful they are epic failures so just do the opposite of them and you will be fine. "

Thank you. As with every forum you always get a few and I think I identified those quite quickly

So I see you’re away down St Albans, I’m over your way in a couple of weeks

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By *urhamjayMan
over a year ago

Durham


"Change the font to Arial and sit back and wait."

I changed mine to the same font that Oracle use because it's the font of all knowledge.

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By *isterCheshire OP   Man
over a year ago

Playa Del Ingles


"Change the font to Arial and sit back and wait.

I changed mine to the same font that Oracle use because it's the font of all knowledge."

There’s always one

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By *tirluvMan
over a year ago

the right frame of mind -London


"It looks ok OP take no notice of the idiots who try to be clever rather than helpful they are epic failures so just do the opposite of them and you will be fine. "

Op just ignore her -and do the opposite of what she says

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By *allDarkStrangrMan
over a year ago

chertsey

Any feedback on my profile would be much appreciated. Thanks

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Sounds as if the opp just wants couples and single ladys to take a look at him really. Prob not changed anything

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By *isterCheshire OP   Man
over a year ago

Playa Del Ingles


"Sounds as if the opp just wants couples and single ladys to take a look at him really. Prob not changed anything"

Seriously

Will someone pay this chap some attention he dearly he craves!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Sounds as if the opp just wants couples and single ladys to take a look at him really. Prob not changed anything

Seriously

Will someone pay this chap some attention he dearly he craves! "

I dont put posts of come look at me thow opp

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By *sagent81Man
over a year ago

Leeds


"Header amended. I think this was down to the ampersand. Weird!

Yes totally agree with pictures, definitely need more. Looking at doing some this week.

I only requested females and couples as that’s who I’m looking to meet, so the actual content will appeal to them rather than a guys as singles or couples "

A Male who’s meet several females will give you better/more realistic advice. A female can only speak for themselves.

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By *isterCheshire OP   Man
over a year ago

Playa Del Ingles


"Sounds as if the opp just wants couples and single ladys to take a look at him really. Prob not changed anything

Seriously

Will someone pay this chap some attention he dearly he craves!

I dont put posts of come look at me thow opp"

Jeez, what’s rattled your cafe you nark.

I’ve asked for some input, I’ve got it. Don’t take it personally

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Ok the line "which ever gets your pussy hungry for my 8in cock. " sounds as though it was written by an immature boy. Well that is how it comes across to me and totally puts me off.

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By *isterCheshire OP   Man
over a year ago

Playa Del Ingles


"Ok the line "which ever gets your pussy hungry for my 8in cock. " sounds as though it was written by an immature boy. Well that is how it comes across to me and totally puts me off. "

That line has had mixed reactions, some positive and some not. I guess it’s hard to please everyone, and it’s the ones who are happy reading that who I want to meet. If it turns some off, I can live with that.

Hope that doesn’t come across as moody, and I do appreciate you taking the time to post

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