FabSwingers.com forum: Some advice

By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Anyone give me a few hints or tips on my profile new to this so want to give my self every chance to get some messages

Cheers

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By *gnitemybodyWoman
over a year ago

Onestepoutofthedoor

The soaking wet comment is a bit cringy for me and you could do with more public pics.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Wording is a bit cringey and no public pics..

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Okay what do you guys suggest me to use instead ??? Any help is welcome

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I don’t really agree with tweaking people’s profiles so they aren’t their own work anymore.

People would be meeting based off things that aren’t a true representation of yourself.

Basic tips for a profile though are have decent pictures, no legal notices on the profile, make sure what you’ve written is spelt correctly and no grammatical errors, and for men, I’d be hesitant to say that you can do something, in your case make a woman shake and be wet, sounds ridiculous.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"I don’t really agree with tweaking people’s profiles so they aren’t their own work anymore.

People would be meeting based off things that aren’t a true representation of yourself.

All of this

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Okay what do you guys suggest me to use instead ??? Any help is welcome

Your own words. Your profile is a reflection of you.

Think of it likevan introduction, how do you want to come across? Inject a bit of personality!

And pics, you won't get far if no one can see you.

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By *gnitemybodyWoman
over a year ago

Onestepoutofthedoor

"Okay what do you guys suggest me to use instead ??? Any help is welcome

It really has to come from yourself,just don't write claiming you can do something amazing with a woman,normal talk showing your personality is far more attractive to me personally.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Okay I've adjusted slightly is that any better ?

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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago

There and to the left a bit

To be honest OP it reads a little juvenile to me - almost like you've watched too many porn films and have just put what you think people will want rather than having actually thought about it.

Whilst sex can result in getting "hot and sweaty" it's not an alluring image to conjure up either - the "show you a few things" line will to some suggest that you're looking to be taught and most won't want to do that.

Agree with ignite that more pics would help too.

If I were you I'd make like Orange Juice and rip it up and start again

Think about what you're looking for, the type of person you are, and what you think you can offer a potential meet and try and put that in words that are both unique and alluring and make you stand out - inject some of your personality into it.

Take a look around at other well verified guys profiles for ideas of what might work for you both from a profile text perspective and pictures - don't copy but get inspiration for your own thing.

Good luck

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By *gnitemybodyWoman
over a year ago

Onestepoutofthedoor

"Okay I've adjusted slightly is that any better ?

Still needs a fair bit of work if I'm honest.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Thanks for all the comments it's helped a lot I'm gonna do a new 1

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"I don’t really agree with tweaking people’s profiles so they aren’t their own work anymore.

People would be meeting based off things that aren’t a true representation of yourself.

Spot on!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

WomAn, women is more than one.

Again it’s your profile you can write what you like. It’s a reflection of you.

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By *gnitemybodyWoman
over a year ago

Onestepoutofthedoor

I'm not sure how many women are up for teaching you thing's either,I think we generally prefer a fairly more confident and experienced man.

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By *gnitemybodyWoman
over a year ago

Onestepoutofthedoor

"Thanks for all the comments it's helped a lot I'm gonna do a new 1 "

and don't forget your fullstops.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

and don't forget your fullstops."

That's good advice - period.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Okay I've changed it and put my personality fully in there now any better??

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By *gnitemybodyWoman
over a year ago

Onestepoutofthedoor

"Okay I've changed it and put my personality fully in there now any better??"

It does read better,pop a few commas in there though and a fullstop on your last sentence.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

If that’s your personality then that’s your personality. That’s what I mean about giving people advice.

I personally think it’s worse than the original, there’s no punctuation either.

When you write something read it out loud and where you’d naturally pause for a breath, put a comma, or a full stop.

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By *allySlinkyWoman
over a year ago

Leeds

It's a bit pointless starting with "I'm male" because we know that.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I can’t comment anymore because I feel like I’m being nasty.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

You guys have helped me out a lot today thank you i hope from what you guys have helped me with today gets me something soon

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

It’s still bad though. Like I said, it’s worse than the original.

We can’t tell you what to write because then it’s conning someone into meeting you.

If you think what you have written is a true reflection on what you want and what you can offer then you have to stick with it.

The punctuation is terrible though and for some people that can be a deal breaker.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Okay thank you

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By *allySlinkyWoman
over a year ago

Leeds

It should be "their dark side" not "there" and "through the whole time" not "throw".

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By *gnitemybodyWoman
over a year ago

Onestepoutofthedoor

Change threw to through.

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By *naswingdressWoman
over a year ago

Manchester (she/her)

I threw a ball.

I got through a date.

Run your profile through a spelling and grammar checker.

It paints a picture, which is good, although not one that appeals to me. Sorry OP.

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By *gnitemybodyWoman
over a year ago

Onestepoutofthedoor

Change Send to send.

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By *oelDorianMan
over a year ago

vanaheim

Sorry mate your bio does sound a bit juvenile and there are a few grammatical errors but if that’s your personality then I’m not going to knock it

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By *gnitemybodyWoman
over a year ago

Onestepoutofthedoor

"It’s still bad though. Like I said, it’s worse than the original.

We can’t tell you what to write because then it’s conning someone into meeting you.

If you think what you have written is a true reflection on what you want and what you can offer then you have to stick with it.

The punctuation is terrible though and for some people that can be a deal breaker. "

That's the thing if it's him we can't tell him it's bad can we. The next woman may think it's a good profile.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Hi I'm looking for a woman that likes to play but also likes to lay back and let me take control.

I like my meets like my football, intense, fun and always play to win.

I'm looking to meet like minded people who enjoy a good laugh, someone who likes a cheeky drink and doesn't hide thier dark side.

I like to play naughty games whilst out on meets to keep things interesting. I want to put a smile on my dates face throughout the time we're out.

If that sounds like someone you’d enjoy being out with then send me a message, let's start talking.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

It still wouldn’t interest me but it reads better.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Nice to see a few ladies trying to help a fella out.. i guess its not about changing it to what others would put its just helping to.word things right? I know what i want to say but im not great at writing my thoughts down..

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

That's exactly me I no what I wanna say but I'm not the best with punctuation and grammar but I'll give it a go see where I get thanks tho guys

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By *gnitemybodyWoman
over a year ago

Onestepoutofthedoor

Good luck.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Just don't bother, so many other single men in here.

Why go through the heartache of being rejected

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