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By *d4fun73 OP   Man
over a year ago

Shipley

Fairly new on here. Messaged quite a few with very little interest so can I get some feedback on my profile?. And hopefully some interest....

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By *allySlinkyWoman
over a year ago

Leeds

The last sentence in your profile doesn't make sense. You say you are intelligent so you need to read your profile back carefully and correct punctuation.

Your pics would be better if you didn't have your dressing gown hanging on your door in them all. The background mess in your 13 Dec pic would put me off meeting you.

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By *d4fun73 OP   Man
over a year ago

Shipley

Thanks my bedroom isn't usually that messy! I deleted that one! Looks like I'll do some new pics lol

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By *allySlinkyWoman
over a year ago

Leeds

No need to delete from your profile that you have been to Quest and Club F

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By *d4fun73 OP   Man
over a year ago

Shipley

True but I don't think it's really needed? You think it's better now?

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By *allySlinkyWoman
over a year ago

Leeds

I still think if you say you are intelligent you need to make the punctuation accurate. How about some commas ?

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By *d4fun73 OP   Man
over a year ago

Shipley

Punctuation added!

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By *allySlinkyWoman
over a year ago

Leeds

I don't think it is the right punctuation. Where are the commas between fit, slim and intelligent ? Where is the question mark after the sentence starting 'fancy' ?

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By *d4fun73 OP   Man
over a year ago

Shipley

English was never my strong point, maths and science much better.

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By *allySlinkyWoman
over a year ago

Leeds

Much better punctuation. Wishing you success on here.

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By *d4fun73 OP   Man
over a year ago

Shipley

I don't hold much hope I'm out numbered massively. Who wants a old guy like me!?

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By *aughty But Nice TwiceWoman
over a year ago

Pontefract

Quite frankly I don't give too hoots about punctuation because I'm clever enough to understand what I'm reading... it's more what you say in your profile about what you want and what you can offer that I look at x

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By *d4fun73 OP   Man
over a year ago

Shipley

Well there is that as well. Do you like what it says and what I can offer?

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By *d4fun73 OP   Man
over a year ago

Shipley


"Quite frankly I don't give too hoots about punctuation because I'm clever enough to understand what I'm reading... it's more what you say in your profile about what you want and what you can offer that I look at x "

What a laugh they hide their profile!

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By *allySlinkyWoman
over a year ago

Leeds


" Do you like what it says and what I can offer? "

How can we see what you have to offer when you have hidden your profile ?

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By *heycallmehanWoman
over a year ago

nr wakefield

There are loads of us about... try a local club... pandora or quest

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