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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Been here a while, decided to decombobulate then recombobulate my profile.

Feel free to evaluate and criticise

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Seriously... I wouldn't get past your profile picture. I don't talk to dicks, arses, tits or twats

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Seriously... I wouldn't get past your profile picture. I don't talk to dicks, arses, tits or twats "

Duly noted. And changed

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Seriously... I wouldn't get past your profile picture. I don't talk to dicks, arses, tits or twats

Duly noted. And changed"

You've hidden him in his little jean tent.

He looks kinda cute

Like he is going to hibernate for the winter

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Seriously... I wouldn't get past your profile picture. I don't talk to dicks, arses, tits or twats

Duly noted. And changed

You've hidden him in his little jean tent.

He looks kinda cute

Like he is going to hibernate for the winter"

He'll wake up for the right reason

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By *allySlinkyWoman
over a year ago

Leeds

"Slightly above average size" not clear if this is your height, weight or cock size.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


""Slightly above average size" not clear if this is your height, weight or cock size. "

Adjusted

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Rip it up and start again.

Too much superfluous content in your brief text. We know you're straight and 37 y/o elsewhere.

The bit about some other men not liking giving oral is just plain ridiculous.

Write an informative paragraph about you and a second about what you are looking for.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Rip it up and start again

Write an informative paragraph about you and a second about what you are looking for. "

Hmmmm. Ok. Any suggestions on the informative bit? I doubt people will want to know about my hobbies

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By *allySlinkyWoman
over a year ago

Leeds

"Genuine guy seeks similar" sounds like you are looking for a man.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


""Genuine guy seeks similar" sounds like you are looking for a man. "

Point taken. It does a bit. Changed

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Been here a while, decided to decombobulate then recombobulate my profile.

Feel free to evaluate and criticise"

Errrrrrrr

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Been here a while, decided to decombobulate then recombobulate my profile.

Feel free to evaluate and criticise

Errrrrrrr "

Aye it's under construction at the minute

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By *anana JoeMan
over a year ago

Sheffield


"Been here a while, decided to decombobulate then recombobulate my profile.

Feel free to evaluate and criticise

Errrrrrrr

Aye it's under construction at the minute"

Its Sunday the counsel don't fix anything on a Sunday.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Constructed.

Any further thoughts?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Rip it up and start again.

Too much superfluous content in your brief text. We already know you're 5'11 and average body shape ffs!

Based on the evidence I'd take out 'creative' as well...

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Rip it up and start again"

Tough crowd

Again. Slimlined it a little.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

The inability to accommodate, the fact that you are ‘looking for excitement’ makes me think you are married. If you are I think it best you state that right st the top of your profile so those who won’t meet marrieds don’t waste their time or yours.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"The inability to accommodate, the fact that you are ‘looking for excitement’ makes me think you are married. If you are I think it best you state that right st the top of your profile so those who won’t meet marrieds don’t waste their time or yours."

Accommodate is tricky, as it is with alot of people here and generally the reason is kids. Yes, I'm single, but I'm also a single parent to a 15yo. Sometimes my younger kids stay over through the week and every second weekend. So accommodate is a tricky point.

Fair point about the looking for excitement. Does make it sound like I'm trying to play away from home

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