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What could I improve on my profile ? And how to get people to respond without sayin hi or how are u

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By *eremiah500 OP   Man
over a year ago

Glasgow / Leeds

Hi guys can anyone give me good suggestions on how to improve my profile to make it look more attractive. And also how to start a convo without sayin hi or how are you since that’s an automatic delete according to some people thank you

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By *naswingdressWoman
over a year ago

Manchester (she/her)

Get rid of the disclaimer, it's meaningless.

Your profile text is generic and clichéd. Plus work on spelling and grammar.

A good opening message to me is something like

"Hi, (insert pleasantry). I like the look of you because (reasons). I think we might have (common interests in common). (something about you)

Hope to hear from you. Happy Fabbing."

It's no guarantee of a reply, but it's a damn good start.

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By *naswingdressWoman
over a year ago

Manchester (she/her)

Err... "(common interests) in common" rather.

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By *eremiah500 OP   Man
over a year ago

Glasgow / Leeds

Thank you very much for the advice helps a lot x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Check your spelling and punctuation, unless it’s just us that hates that. Also starting with NO MEN is probably a bit OTT.

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By *eremiah500 OP   Man
over a year ago

Glasgow / Leeds


"Check your spelling and punctuation, unless it’s just us that hates that. Also starting with NO MEN is probably a bit OTT. "

I have corrected it a little bit need to spend abit more time on it haha but thank you

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By *naswingdressWoman
over a year ago

Manchester (she/her)


"Check your spelling and punctuation, unless it’s just us that hates that. Also starting with NO MEN is probably a bit OTT. "

Yeah, that reads homophobic to me, which is a turn off. Just change your message filters and ignore people who look that you're not interested in.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Check your spelling and punctuation, unless it’s just us that hates that. Also starting with NO MEN is probably a bit OTT.

I have corrected it a little bit need to spend abit more time on it haha but thank you "

Writeit in word, do a check, then copy and paste

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

The chocolate factory thing is a bit cringey

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Can I jump in here and also ask for a constructive critique of my profile?

Thanks

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Can I jump in here and also ask for a constructive critique of my profile?

Thanks"

Poor form to hijack other people’s threads.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

In which case I apologise to the OP.

I’ll start a thread myself.

I asked on here as the feedback seemed to be constructive rather than just rude as some threads turn out.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"In which case I apologise to the OP.

I’ll start a thread myself.

I asked on here as the feedback seemed to be constructive rather than just rude as some threads turn out."

Give it a mo!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"In which case I apologise to the OP.

I’ll start a thread myself.

I asked on here as the feedback seemed to be constructive rather than just rude as some threads turn out.

Give it a mo! "

Ha ha ha ha ha ha haaaaaaaa!

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By *eremiah500 OP   Man
over a year ago

Glasgow / Leeds

It is funny but hahah

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