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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Although I've had the profile for a while, I've only just started trying to use it for real.

I've had a couple of attempts at writing a bio up until now but upon revision they have often been cringey at best and straight up creepy at worst.

This time I've tried to be a bit more down to earth with it and not bothered with clever lines and am wondering how it looks to someone else.

Any feedback would really be appreciated.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

It’s very unconfident ....

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Try a bit of humour in there mate, a quirky quip, maybe a joke. Everyone loves a bit of humour

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

I had a feeling it might be, as i say in it i'm probably not the most experienced and don't really want falsely to make out to be. Do you think i went a bit overboard on explaining that or is it other parts of the profile aswell?

Thanks for the feedback anyways

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

haha brilliant name man, can see what u mean

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

It’s almosy every line I’m afraid.

Why are you telling us you hardly use your profile. Lack of veris ? It’s not a confident start.

I’m young. I’m inexperienced.

I can’t travel.

I don’t know if this is normal.

I can’t accommodate.

If you want to be honest try....

Young pup looking for cougar who wants to corrupt. My inexperience is your opportunity.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Haha Actually that's a good point, if i cut out the waffle pretty much all I'm saying is negative isn't it.

I'll have another look at it later on to see if i can spin it around a bit.

Thanks again for the feedback and that's a good line I'll use that one.

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