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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

I'm sorry, it's another "my profile" posting. I have have tried to make it good, or at least readable. Just think i could be missing something but not sure what!!

Any help you lovely fabbers

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

Your are missing something. Patience.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Your are missing something. Patience. "

No patience i have and will wait and enjoy the site. We all want a profile the appeals though. All I am looking for is advise to male it so, if needed

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Hi...so I've looked through your profile.

Your pics look like furtive hotel ones and I think you could do better with your composition.

A few typos in your profile ( I know it doesnt matter to everyone but to me it smacks of lack of effort) and overall mate it just sounds... well ... defeated. Its ambiguous whether you are straight or bi so fess up

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Hi...so I've looked through your profile.

Your pics look like furtive hotel ones and I think you could do better with your composition.

A few typos in your profile ( I know it doesnt matter to everyone but to me it smacks of lack of effort) and overall mate it just sounds... well ... defeated. Its ambiguous whether you are straight or bi so fess up"

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Pics were done while in a hotel admittedly.

I will fix up the typo's as I can't be having that lol.

Thanks for the help, much appreciated

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I like it. If you messaged me and lived closer I'd probably chat.

Nice face pic but like someone else said the rest of them look a bit rushed.

Typos wouldn't totally put me off but I'd rather not see them

I'd like to see a sentence or two about why you don't accommodate. If you're attached then fess up.

No need to be apologetic for wanting to chat with people. But then that seems to be part of your character which isn't always a bad thing though may irritate some.

Good luck

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

P.s. Happy birthday : )

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"P.s. Happy birthday : ) "

Thank you very much

Yeah I can see where your coming from. Will look to change the way the text comes across and add more detail.

As for the photos, I see where your coming from and will see if help can be brought in to take some new ones, to make them better for those viewing.

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By *allySlinkyWoman
over a year ago

Leeds

I suggest not mentioning your kids.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"I suggest not mentioning your kids. "

Makes sense, will remove that thanks

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