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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Any would be grate

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Any would be grate"

Get rid of the three pointless statements at the end.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Hows that?

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By *attoo manMan
over a year ago

Rhyl

Bit long

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Hows that?"

they're pointless and mean nothing.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Deleted the disclamers but still want it covering what i'm really looking for.

She

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

??

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By *overOral0Man
over a year ago

Nr Cheltenham

Personally i think its fine. Biggest problem you will have is people (mainly blokes) not bothering to read it properly. Happy swinging x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Your profile text is very long. Maybe try getting rid of the bit where you say you've been on here before? What are you trying to achieve by mentioning that?

I would seriously re-read your profile text a few times and try to keep the gist

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By *bsolutebeginnersCouple
over a year ago

Planet Ork

Seems ok but there again we like a good long one, oo er mrs

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By *allySlinkyWoman
over a year ago

Leeds

I think it is too long and waffly. I think it needs to be clearer that if you meet a couple she will only play with the woman.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

It was in there to see if we could find some of the people we knew from last time, plus to out the timewasters. Also if we were to meet a couple, that wouldn't be the case if we were all comfortable, however I am very keen to explore the bi side of me. Thanks for the advice

She xx

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Edited...hows that?

Mr

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By *allySlinkyWoman
over a year ago

Leeds


"Edited...hows that?

Mr"

To be honest I can barely see any difference.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Well those 15 lines wont be missed then

Thanks guys n gals

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By *essica jamiesonWoman
over a year ago

edinburgh

Did u shorten ur profile words? How long was it b4? Phew! Its still too long i gave up half way through! Short & to the point! But thats just my opinion

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

It’s very negative. Not at all appealing. Why not put information in that attracts people rather than that which repels? It’s mostlyabout what you don’t want, not much about what you can offer.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

That bettet?

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