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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Hey Fab.

Iv spend a bit of time lurking around here trying to learn a lot about the lifestyle.

Iv written a profile, but wonder if I have gone too far in the wrong direction.

So, (takes a deep breath)

Please can you critique my profile...

Thanks.

L

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

I hope I’m not bumping this too soon.

But if anyone ask any suggestions/comments, I’d greatly appreciate it.

L

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Profile far too long, wouldn’t bother reading it.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

That was my concern.

I was hoping that it was engaging enough that actually by the time your two paragraphs in you want to know more and read on.

Cheers.

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By *rs Butterfly.Woman
over a year ago

Never NeverLand

Its funny and l like parts but its far too long and too many brackets.

Keep the humour as I like it but I would lead with the fact you are married rather than put it at the end.

Saying you have a set dress size of a women is very off putting.

Hope that helps

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Kind of you to say.

Re dress size. How’s it best to portray what I’m into, the whole ample/curves/normal is so subjective that I thought best to be straight and honest, then end up deep into conversation that I’m not actually attracted to.

I’m not here to upset anyone tho either.

Thanks for the response.

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By *mooth shaftMan
over a year ago

Edinburgh

As a bloke to bloke ....

Very negative name for starters. Need more pics and less text

Think about grabbing folks attention first ... title and pics then a punchy write up

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By *londieddWoman
over a year ago

fife

trying on clothes in a shop for your pic? have you no nice clothes of your own?

your text is too long, was bored after the first few

lines

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By *istress-MazikeenWoman
over a year ago

bolton

I like the text in one sense as it explains what you want, but, you need to read it through as there are bits that are difficult to understand.

Size 10-16 difficult, as someone who is 5' 2" and a size 16 is different to someone who is 5'11" and a size 16.

Agree with others you need to mention that you are married first so that you give women the option to meet or not.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"As a bloke to bloke ....

Very negative name for starters. Need more pics and less text

Think about grabbing folks attention first ... title and pics then a punchy write up

"

Fair point. I’ll consider consider something else.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Pics are appalling! A man in a bin and a crumpled man is a shirt. No thanks OP please try harder

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"trying on clothes in a shop for your pic? have you no nice clothes of your own?

your text is too long, was bored after the first few

lines

"

Sorry that you got bored.

Yes, I was trying clothes on. But half the problem is I work in leisure, so 90% of my pics are of me in tracksuits and hoodies. Or running kit.

But, I get your point.

Thanks.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"I like the text in one sense as it explains what you want, but, you need to read it through as there are bits that are difficult to understand.

Size 10-16 difficult, as someone who is 5' 2" and a size 16 is different to someone who is 5'11" and a size 16.

Agree with others you need to mention that you are married first so that you give women the option to meet or not."

That’s fair enough statement too. I will try again. Would you be ok for me to message you with the new paragraph on it once it’s done?

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Pics are appalling! A man in a bin and a crumpled man is a shirt. No thanks OP please try harder "

Interesting that you see it that way. That was the back end of a 10mile run. I’m proud of that moment, but I can understand why you would say that as there is no context to go with it.

I accept your challenge.

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By *allySlinkyWoman
over a year ago

Leeds


"

But half the problem is I work in leisure, so 90% of my pics are of me in tracksuits and hoodies. Or running gear "

Your profile says you are a stay at home dad

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"

But half the problem is I work in leisure, so 90% of my pics are of me in tracksuits and hoodies. Or running gear

Your profile says you are a stay at home dad"

Ok, good spot. and I am. But I spend anything up to 12 hours a week doing something else which inevitably means I end up in tracksuits bottoms, shorts and hoodies.

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By *istress-MazikeenWoman
over a year ago

bolton


"

But half the problem is I work in leisure, so 90% of my pics are of me in tracksuits and hoodies. Or running gear

Your profile says you are a stay at home dad

Ok, good spot. and I am. But I spend anything up to 12 hours a week doing something else which inevitably means I end up in tracksuits bottoms, shorts and hoodies. "

Ok if your a stay at home Dad does that mean you are Married?

Pics could be in an IRONED Shirt, A sexy bit of body, not a leg, think what a woman would like to see not what you pick off your phone.

Take time to take the picture, review it and then put up on here

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By *unandbuckCouple
over a year ago

Sheffield

I'd explain your method of meeting, since you're on the Isle of Man, I'd guess there are very limited numbers there. You're going to need to travel...

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"

But half the problem is I work in leisure, so 90% of my pics are of me in tracksuits and hoodies. Or running gear

Your profile says you are a stay at home dad

Ok, good spot. and I am. But I spend anything up to 12 hours a week doing something else which inevitably means I end up in tracksuits bottoms, shorts and hoodies.

Ok if your a stay at home Dad does that mean you are Married?

Pics could be in an IRONED Shirt, A sexy bit of body, not a leg, think what a woman would like to see not what you pick off your phone.

Take time to take the picture, review it and then put up on here"

Married, Indeed I am, lots of comments above about it. Which are duly noted and will be actioned

Ironed shirt, ok it wasn’t the best idea to choose a pic of me in the nicest clothes I’ve bought in 5 years, which I thought was ok. But I get what your saying.

Sexy body, my legs are my sexy bit. Sadly I have no idea what ladies want to see apart from the usual “no cock pics” - answers on a postcard!!

I could do better with the pics.

Thank you for your time.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"I'd explain your method of meeting, since you're on the Isle of Man, I'd guess there are very limited numbers there. You're going to need to travel..."

Top tip.

It is limited compared to the rest of the UK.

Cheers

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Name changed, bio updated, pics to follow soon.

Thanks for your help.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

So uve now gone from saying ur married to not mentioning it at all

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Ok I’ve got to ask why you standing in a bin of water?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Ok I’ve got to ask why you standing in a bin of water?"

If u read up a bit he explained it was after a 10k run

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"So uve now gone from saying ur married to not mentioning it at all "

Good try. It’s the 6th word!!!!!

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Ok I’ve got to ask why you standing in a bin of water?"

Post 10 mile run. It helps to speed up recovery.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Ok I’ve got to ask why you standing in a bin of water?

If u read up a bit he explained it was after a 10k run"

I think the candy canes have gone to your head Ms Reindeer. That’s two miss reads in as many posts.

But your deep into preparation for your big night next week, so I’ll let you off.

Once more tho, and I’ll have to put you over my knee....

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By *isobedient-Bi-BoudoirCouple
over a year ago

Central london

Your full off rubbish

Your a photographer your picture choices really gives the impression lmao

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By *ady LickWoman
over a year ago

Northampton Somewhere

I was just thinking that as a photographer you really should be able to produce much better pics. The standing in a bin full of water is not doing you any favours.

I didn't see your original text but as it is I think it's ok. Do you have a couples profile to?

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Your full off rubbish

Your a photographer your picture choices really gives the impression lmao

"

Given that I’m holding the camera for a selfie, after a 10 mile run sure I’ll take that.

But as addresses above it’s not good enough and I accept that. Some of my private stuff is a better. But honestly, I’d rather be behind the camera than infront of it.

Thanks for the advice.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"I was just thinking that as a photographer you really should be able to produce much better pics. The standing in a bin full of water is not doing you any favours.

I didn't see your original text but as it is I think it's ok. Do you have a couples profile to?"

I agree. i do. Just not of me on my mobile phone.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"I was just thinking that as a photographer you really should be able to produce much better pics. The standing in a bin full of water is not doing you any favours.

I didn't see your original text but as it is I think it's ok. Do you have a couples profile to?"

I do, but it’s fresh this week, and we need to play, to get some more recent shots.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Your full off rubbish

Your a photographer your picture choices really gives the impression lmao

"

This has annoyed me. It’s not really a critique, is it.

If you had of said get your camera out and use a tripod and with an app, and bounce the flash to avoid shadows. I could have accepted that.

Cheers for the help.

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