FabSwingers.com forum: Profile advice

By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Hi guys, we have recently 're wrote our bio, would love some feedback? X

By *allySlinkyWoman
over a year ago

Leeds

Hello. I would drop the first line about being on here for a while with no success. Makes for a negative start to your profile.

Wishing you some fun filled times on here.

By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

More male body pics.... Happy hunting

By *ieman300Man
over a year ago

Best Greggs in Cheshire East

There is a typo. out should be our regarding your journey.

Overall it sounds like you are talking yourselves down at every opportunity. I wonder if you are trying to avoid sounding too good to be true and taking it to far the other way. It is just too cold and bland.

My advice is re word everything with a positive head on. It just really comes across as ok if we must here is something about us.

I hope you find that constructive and understand what I am trying to say. I am sure you are a lot nicer than you seem to give yourselves credit for