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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Anybody give me some advice on my profile to improve it?

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By *gnitemybodyWoman
over a year ago

Onestepoutofthedoor

The writing is a bit messy isn't it,I think that needs some work.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"The writing is a bit messy isn't it,I think that needs some work."
any suggestions

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By *oxy_minxWoman
over a year ago

Scotland - Aberdeen

It's all over the place and doesn't read well at all.

It sounds very haphazard to be honest

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By *gnitemybodyWoman
over a year ago

Onestepoutofthedoor


"The writing is a bit messy isn't it,I think that needs some work.any suggestions "

It needs to flow more easily,it looks like you've just done bullet points,it needs to have sentences and paragraphs.

Maybe write it how you would speak it outloud,include a bit more on each point.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"The writing is a bit messy isn't it,I think that needs some work.any suggestions

It needs to flow more easily,it looks like you've just done bullet points,it needs to have sentences and paragraphs.

Maybe write it how you would speak it outloud,include a bit more on each point.

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ive tried to make it more simple if that's better ,to be honest I'm not good at making myself sound good,I'm just me lol

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