FabSwingers.com forum: New pics added and profile amended your thoughts plz

By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Hi I'm still very new to all this so please can u take some time to look thoug my profile n just advise me on how I come across n what your thoughts are much apriciated thanks Richard

By *unandbuckCouple
over a year ago

Sheffield

It's better than lots. If I were being critical, I'd say most people don't want to take on a trainee, and your job and your move 1/2 down the road isn't important.

Get a meet veri at a club or social as soon as you can.

MrB

By *emini ManMan
over a year ago

There and to the left a bit

Pics aren't bad OP and at least avoid the obvious cock shot, maybe a few more along the same lines from different angles would work.

Profile blurb is better than most, but does come across like you don't know what you're doing a little - you need to get across who you are, what you are looking for and what you can offer a little better.

You also have a lot of "I" in there which makes it all sound a bit me, me, me.

I'd drop the "so who knows could always drop in and give you a good service too hehe" line too...sounds like something out of a 1970s Confessions film!!

Your explanation of why you can't accomodate would also lead me to question if as well as your little girl, you also have a wife/partner at home, so you might want to clarify that.

In summary you need to sell yourself and make yourself stand out from the crowd a little better.

By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Still work to do then I guess lol

Thank you for taking the time to help