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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

[Removed by poster at 23/03/17 21:17:39]

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Is it longer than your post? Some aren't! (I haven't been bothered to look btw)

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Yeah but someone else looked at it and said it was crap but gave me some good advice.

So do you have any advice on how I can improve my profile.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Op, sorry but you're profile is rubbish.

Say something about yourself and what you're hoping to find.

Lose the anorak photo - tells the viewer absolutely nothing, except that you have an anorak - and get some decent photos instead.

What on earth is the second photo about? (photo mods, what were you thinking when you approved it?)

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"[Removed by poster at 23/03/17 23:59:14]"

Man of many words

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Haha yeah

I just changed my profile text

What do you think of it?

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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago

There and to the left a bit

To be honest if that's an improvement then I dread to think what the original was like!! You need to think of your profile as a shop window and ask yourself honestly if you'd go into your shop having looked in the window? I certainly wouldn't!! It tells the reader nothing of who you are, what you're looking for and what you think you can offer.

For ideas take a look around at other well verified single guy profiles and come up with something of your own.

You need better pictures too that show off your body - again look at other successful single guy profiles for ideas.

Good luck

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Ok thank

I will try

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

I Inproved it a bit gemini

Tell me what you think

I took some stuff from you profile

If thats alright with you.

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By *ir1967Man
over a year ago

in da sticks, london, amsterdam, madrid

Seems added some text , but....pretty each line or sentence starts with I

Hmm, reading it sound like "me, myself and I"

Since I am not a native English speaker I am not sure whether you get away with it but in my home country your profile text would be very much interpreted as - this guy is on an ego trip -

Just saying, but hey, with 19 years on a swinger site, who knows what you might coukd bring to the table to make the party rock...

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