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By *candalaria OP Man
over a year ago

Greater Manchester

Hey guys, I hope you're all having fun :D

Was hoping you could give me some tips on improving my profile. Been on here a few weeks already and i know its super difficult for a single male so hoping to get a good profile to help. Any tips or advice would be appreciated x

By *unandbuckCouple
over a year ago

Sheffield

Your only pic is 90% a woman, people want to see more than the back of your hand.

MrB

By *inkySlinkyCouple
over a year ago

Leeds

I agree with the above.

Sally

By *candalaria OP Man
over a year ago

Greater Manchester

Thank you. I'l be changing it today x

By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Your only pic is 90% a woman, people want to see more than the back of your hand.

MrB"

What MrB said.

Then your profile

Genuine smooth caramel skinned gentleman from the US living in the North West for the last few years or so.

Delete or so.

Rephrase to "I keep clean at all times am trimmed or shaven and always like to smell and dress good."

Open to suggestions. I do love sex but I'm not here to treat women like a piece of meat (unless of course thats what they want haha) I enjoy good convos, dates and kissing.

Delete do

Replace thats with that is or that's

I do have children (from a previous relationship) and I do work so hoping to meet people in between then. I do have pics so dont feel shy to ask for them

Delete do three times. Just rephrase first two lines to:

I hope to meet people in a balanced approach - time is precious between work and spending time with my children (from a previous relationship).

By *candalaria OP Man
over a year ago

Greater Manchester

Thank you. I'm on it x

By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Thank you. I'm on it x"

You need to use paragraphs to break the text into sections to present the different thoughts within it. It helps a reader.