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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

I have been here for a few months and chatted with a few people but would like to take it up a notch.

I have been reading what people have been saying to others who ask for profile advice (some have really been harsh) and tried to incorporate as much as I could, I can take constructive criticism just as long as it's constructive, I'm not asking to be nice but please be courteous and tell the truth. I mean you can call someone an ASSHOLE or you call someone an asshole. I'm looking for input from single ladies and couples both men and women.

So have at it and Thanks for the advice!!!

RC67

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

It reads a bit cluttered...and a bit like a teenager who just discovered sex you want it all...hey no harm in that...it reads very excitable.

The 420 reference will put a lot off.

I'm not sure if I'm just reading cultural differences between the UK and the US

Hope it didn't crush you...no ass holes were harmed in the making of my response

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By *exyredheadtattooCouple
over a year ago

Beaumont


"I have been here for a few months and chatted with a few people but would like to take it up a notch.

I have been reading what people have been saying to others who ask for profile advice (some have really been harsh) and tried to incorporate as much as I could, I can take constructive criticism just as long as it's constructive, I'm not asking to be nice but please be courteous and tell the truth. I mean you can call someone an ASSHOLE or you call someone an asshole. I'm looking for input from single ladies and couples both men and women.

So have at it and Thanks for the advice!!!

RC67"
Seems pretty good. Minor spelling errors. Possibly more pics in public social situations. All I can offer.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"It reads a bit cluttered...and a bit like a teenager who just discovered sex you want it all...hey no harm in that...it reads very excitable.

The 420 reference will put a lot off.

I'm not sure if I'm just reading cultural differences between the UK and the US

Hope it didn't crush you...no ass holes were harmed in the making of my response "

I Appreciate the input.

reads like a teenager hurts from one who is only 2 years out of theirs. (javascript:doSmilie(' ')

I thought the 420 with respectful was OK but I'll see what others say. I'm not a stoner so(javascript:doSmilie(' ')

After being on this site for a few months I wish I lived in the UK ya'll are the true free spirits.

What about the pictures?

Thank you

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"I have been here for a few months and chatted with a few people but would like to take it up a notch.

I have been reading what people have been saying to others who ask for profile advice (some have really been harsh) and tried to incorporate as much as I could, I can take constructive criticism just as long as it's constructive, I'm not asking to be nice but please be courteous and tell the truth. I mean you can call someone an ASSHOLE or you call someone an asshole. I'm looking for input from single ladies and couples both men and women.

So have at it and Thanks for the advice!!!

RC67Seems pretty good. Minor spelling errors. Possibly more pics in public social situations. All I can offer."

Thank you neighbor. I will try to get out and get someone to take a picture of me. lol

Do you think it will surprise them if I took my pants off?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

It is ok but you could really do with a spell check.

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By *inkySlinkyCouple
over a year ago

Leeds

"Playing with the clint" ?

Sally

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Thanks for the feedback. Spellchecker is my problem, it changes it after I type it correctly. I need to proofread it better though.

What surprises me I'm getting more comments on spelling and less on the pictures, are yall just trying to be nice. lol

I know I said constructive criticism but I need to here the truth. I need to hear what will help me as A single man get more action and couples pick me.

Thanks again for your comments.

RC

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By *andbCouple
over a year ago

Wakefield

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The 420 reference will put a lot off.

Have come across this phrase a few times recently - what does it mean?

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By *ocoaXXXMan
over a year ago

Coventry

Does someone mind reviewing mine?

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By *andbCouple
over a year ago

Wakefield


"Does someone mind reviewing mine?"

suggest less cock shots ( we all know what they look like) may be try some head & shoulder pics - can always blank out full face if not wanting to show full facial. I (fem) like to see body shots with open shirt and tie loosely round shoulders, suit and shirt . Suggest you look at other profiles and which are fabbed the most and take some inspiration from them.

Say more about yourself coming across as a bit arrogant.

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By *ocoaXXXMan
over a year ago

Coventry


"Does someone mind reviewing mine?

suggest less cock shots ( we all know what they look like) may be try some head & shoulder pics - can always blank out full face if not wanting to show full facial. I (fem) like to see body shots with open shirt and tie loosely round shoulders, suit and shirt . Suggest you look at other profiles and which are fabbed the most and take some inspiration from them.

Say more about yourself coming across as a bit arrogant. "

Thankyou for the feedback will make some changes soon

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

The 420 4:20pm is the time of day when high school let out and people meet at a certain place and smoke .

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Does someone mind reviewing mine?"

Hey get your own post.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"It is ok but you could really do with a spell check."

I don't want to be just OK. What can I do to be amazing?

OK I have taken your comment but could use more. and made some changes. Let me know if I'm heading in the right direction.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

In my opinion this profile sounds awful! "Fuck the shit of you", disrespectful towards a woman. Also you sound like you want a sex machine to make your own porno!

I know is a sex site,but the language you use! Really put me off!

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By *inkySlinkyCouple
over a year ago

Leeds


"Does someone mind reviewing mine?"

"Looking for freaky fun" sounds a bit scary.

Sally

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By *inkySlinkyCouple
over a year ago

Leeds

"Fuck the shit out of you". "I most likely won't say no"

Not very enticing phrases.

Sally

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"In my opinion this profile sounds awful! "Fuck the shit of you", disrespectful towards a woman. Also you sound like you want a sex machine to make your own porno!

I know is a sex site,but the language you use! Really put me off!"

I'm very sorry if my profile offended you that was not the intent. I show respect to everyone. But blocking me so I can't apologize doesn't help so I hope you get to read this

That is why I'm asking for advice. your quick with the criticism and judging but no constructiveness I'm here opening myself so you could be a little more understanding.

Again I meant no disrespect.

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