FabSwingers.com forum: Profile feedback please!

By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Morning all.

Hoping to get some feedback on my profile. Any suggestions / pointers most welcome.

These kind of things have never been my strong suit.

Thanks!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I found it a bit confusing to be honest.

Are you just looking to chat to people then because it says you're not looking to meet up?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I know I am, I accept it, let's see what happens!

What do you mean by the above sentence ?

Since joining the site last week I have quickly realised I need to make my profile much more comprehensive!

Who cares about your recent enlightenment? Does it say anything more about you? Nope. Delete

In keeping with my experience of most websites of a similar nature I find it hard to put myself in a nice neat box.

Delete

I'm preferences change often, so much so that I'm not going to list them all here.

Rephrase - to something like I am open to experimentation as my preferences are always evolving and growing. Saying you won't list them is just negative and suggests you are lazy.

That said I'm very happy in the submissive role with men, women and couples. Equally happy taking the masculine role with women. I also have a friend who is very dominant and we have played with single women in a few different ways. He and I dom to the lady or him and hwr dom and me sub. That's confusing

It's not confusing. You are vers / switch. Rephrase

To cover some initial questions, I guess I'm ok looking, I have a good professional job, .I'm not a gym nut and can hold a decent conversation

Rephrase to I take pride in my appearance so will always turn up clean and nice smelling. I am genuine (if you are) professional - last sentence is good.

I'm new here so finding my feet, please be patient! I'm not looking to meet up just hoping to find some interesting people and then let's see what happens.

Put this earlier

Jonny

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By *inkySlinkyCouple
over a year ago

Leeds

Indian princess this is the second time today I have spotted your excellent profile rewrites.

Sally

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Indian princess this is the second time today I have spotted your excellent profile rewrites.

Sally "

Blush. I hope he uses it.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Thanks so much.

Excellent advice Indian Princess!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Thanks so much.

Excellent advice Indian Princess!

Please don't use the "I'm genuine" line.

It's such a cliche on here.

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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago

There and to the left a bit

I'm starting to think Indian Princess should be upgraded to Queen Of The Profile Advisors as really can't add anything else to her excellent comments here (or anywhere else)

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"I'm starting to think Indian Princess should be upgraded to Queen Of The Profile Advisors as really can't add anything else to her excellent comments here (or anywhere else)

Maybe I'm reading something different, but to me it's just full of cliches and says what loads have on their profiles.

A profile should be individual to the person writing it, not just like a copy and paste of every other bland profile on here.

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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago

There and to the left a bit

"I'm starting to think Indian Princess should be upgraded to Queen Of The Profile Advisors as really can't add anything else to her excellent comments here (or anywhere else)

Maybe I'm reading something different, but to me it's just full of cliches and says what loads have on their profiles.

A profile should be individual to the person writing it, not just like a copy and paste of every other bland profile on here."

Oh I agree that a profile should be unique to the individual that owns it and not something generic and bland - and for that reason don't think it's right for someone else to totally re-write a profile from scratch, but do think the pointers given were all valid and constructive in this instance.

The key will be whether the OP acts on them.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"I'm starting to think Indian Princess should be upgraded to Queen Of The Profile Advisors as really can't add anything else to her excellent comments here (or anywhere else)

Maybe I'm reading something different, but to me it's just full of cliches and says what loads have on their profiles.

A profile should be individual to the person writing it, not just like a copy and paste of every other bland profile on here."

You can only use the content that is on someone's profile - you can't create a persona for someone when you don't know them. The onus is on the OP to think carefully about themselves that go beyond the cliches.

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