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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Hi folks ive had the same profile for a while now and would like any tips on how to make it better , How to make it a bit more exciting ? How to make it a better read .

I cant put a face pic in public because of the job i do

Hope to hear from you

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

More pics and better quality would be a good stat

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Better quality in what please ?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Maybe lose the Wolves shirt Rocky!

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Maybe lose the Wolves shirt Rocky!"

Its a retro holland shirt mate

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By *inky-MinxWoman
over a year ago

Grantham

I looked but was put off by the pic and the length of the text.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Edit edit edit that text - it's so waffling

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

put off by the picture ? i admit its not the best and that will be looked into but why is one put off ?

but as for the text a couple of you have mentioned it , please feel free to point me in the right direction , not sure what to make of the ''waffling'' comment though

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By *inky-MinxWoman
over a year ago

Grantham


"put off by the picture ? i admit its not the best and that will be looked into but why is one put off ?

but as for the text a couple of you have mentioned it , please feel free to point me in the right direction , not sure what to make of the ''waffling'' comment though"

Why put face pics that aren't face pics? Either show your face or leave it off

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By *inky-MinxWoman
over a year ago

Grantham

And put other pics instead.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Theres not a lot a bloke can do other than a face pic or a cock pic and i wont be showing the latter

Ive not got the greatest body in the world to show so i cant put that on , other than that there are my moobs but i guess no one wants to see them either and as stated i cant show a full face pic due to my line of work

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"put off by the picture ? i admit its not the best and that will be looked into but why is one put off ?

but as for the text a couple of you have mentioned it , please feel free to point me in the right direction , not sure what to make of the ''waffling'' comment though"

Here is a stab of editing the waffle out of your profile - and structuring it - No one has time to read all that especially when the image you want to project is all over the place.

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Genuine, non pushy, single, clean and discrete straight guy - previously on here as bullywwfc if you remember say hey.

I love to socialise and interact with people in and out of bed. What can I say, larger than life persona to match my build, cheeky blue eyes and soft brown hair to run your fingers through it. I have well maintained facial stubble and i also can be seen clean shaven at times and i also maintain hair in other areas of my body.

Looking for single females, MF and FF couples for nsa good times. I'm very partial to ginger haired females with freckles I am NOT looking for tv/cd or mf couples with a bi male.

I accom in hotels. I like to go to House Parties, GangBangs and the club scene. I am a member of Chams in Darlaston and also a member of Xtasia in West Bromwich.

I like to give massages to ladies and I've been told I'm quite good at it. I only partake in safe sex. The only watersports i'm interested in involves a jet ski on the med.

You are more than welcome to browse through my verifications. I have other pics in private and can be seen if requested. If we have met before please feel free to verify me.

Ask me for my kik messenger (feel free to inbox for that)

Happy swinging

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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago

There and to the left a bit


"Theres not a lot a bloke can do other than a face pic or a cock pic and i wont be showing the latter

Ive not got the greatest body in the world to show so i cant put that on , other than that there are my moobs but i guess no one wants to see them either and as stated i cant show a full face pic due to my line of work"

There's plenty you can do by way of pics without it having to be either a face pic or a cock pic, and you don't need an Adonis like body either, I certainly don't and yet am quite pleased with most of my pics, or take a look at Ye Olde Witch Doctor's profile he's always got good pics.

To be honest this is the first time I've seen someone with 51 veris asking for advice!!

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"put off by the picture ? i admit its not the best and that will be looked into but why is one put off ?

but as for the text a couple of you have mentioned it , please feel free to point me in the right direction , not sure what to make of the ''waffling'' comment though

Here is a stab of editing the waffle out of your profile - and structuring it - No one has time to read all that especially when the image you want to project is all over the place.

---

Genuine, non pushy, single, clean and discrete straight guy - previously on here as bullywwfc if you remember say hey.

I love to socialise and interact with people in and out of bed. What can I say, larger than life persona to match my build, cheeky blue eyes and soft brown hair to run your fingers through it. I have well maintained facial stubble and i also can be seen clean shaven at times and i also maintain hair in other areas of my body.

Looking for single females, MF and FF couples for nsa good times. I'm very partial to ginger haired females with freckles I am NOT looking for tv/cd or mf couples with a bi male.

I accom in hotels. I like to go to House Parties, GangBangs and the club scene. I am a member of Chams in Darlaston and also a member of Xtasia in West Bromwich.

I like to give massages to ladies and I've been told I'm quite good at it. I only partake in safe sex. The only watersports i'm interested in involves a jet ski on the med.

You are more than welcome to browse through my verifications. I have other pics in private and can be seen if requested. If we have met before please feel free to verify me.

Ask me for my kik messenger (feel free to inbox for that)

Happy swinging"

thank you

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

That's just a first edit - it can do with another 2 or three stabs because it's still too long.

Suggest you stop using "also" in every other sentence.

As I said in another forum thread - this text and your photos are your marketing tool - what image are you trying to project, who are you targeting, etc

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By *inky-MinxWoman
over a year ago

Grantham


"Theres not a lot a bloke can do other than a face pic or a cock pic and i wont be showing the latter

Ive not got the greatest body in the world to show so i cant put that on , other than that there are my moobs but i guess no one wants to see them either and as stated i cant show a full face pic due to my line of work

There's plenty you can do by way of pics without it having to be either a face pic or a cock pic, and you don't need an Adonis like body either, I certainly don't and yet am quite pleased with most of my pics, or take a look at Ye Olde Witch Doctor's profile he's always got good pics.

To be honest this is the first time I've seen someone with 51 veris asking for advice!! "

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"That's just a first edit - it can do with another 2 or three stabs because it's still too long.

Suggest you stop using "also" in every other sentence.

As I said in another forum thread - this text and your photos are your marketing tool - what image are you trying to project, who are you targeting, etc "

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"That's just a first edit - it can do with another 2 or three stabs because it's still too long.

Suggest you stop using "also" in every other sentence.

As I said in another forum thread - this text and your photos are your marketing tool - what image are you trying to project, who are you targeting, etc "

Please feel free to have a stab at it , i am impressed with the 1st effort , some have a better way with words than others

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

If someone knows you they will still know who you are with the star on your face. You even mention eye colour to confirm it

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"If someone knows you they will still know who you are with the star on your face. You even mention eye colour to confirm it

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By *inkySlinkyCouple
over a year ago

Leeds

Indian princess you have done a great job editing his profile. I hope he uses it.

Sally

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Indian princess you have done a great job editing his profile. I hope he uses it.

Sally"

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