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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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OK OP, let's break it down and see what your profile actually says about you.
I'm going to be somewhat brutal here and go through it line by line, but this is all with the intention of helping you to understand why you're getting comments about it being 'generic' and 'not really saying much'
OK, so the first two lines then. Personally, if it were me, I'd lose the greeting, but that's really up to you - though I'm sure you wouldn't start your C.V. or a shop window advert with it.
As for the bit about your 'relationship status' and location - that information is already there anyway. It doesn't tell us anything that we wouldn't know already before opening up your profile page. OK, admittedly, there are a number of married guys on here posing as single men but, well, I'm sure you get where I'm coming from.
The bit about loving to meet new people etc. Nothing really wrong with it, but is it telling us much, really?
What you're looking for - well, that information is also already there. It's the bit that you selected your preferences for. Age range etc.
The part about requiring a face pic is OK, but I feel that this is kinda hypocritical, seeings as you aren't showing one yourself.
Lose the disclaimer. It's meaningless. You have posted your profile information and picture in the public domain. Read the site FAQ's - the site owners don't want people putting such nonsense on their profiles as it uses up valuable server space.
So, overall what have we learned from your profile text that we can't find elsewhere on your profile? Do you see my point?
What can you offer the ladies and couples that might meet you?
What makes you different from every other male out there?
What is your unique selling point?
What makes you stand out?
As I said, sorry to be brutal, but the point of the exercise was to get you to re-examine your profile. I hope i've helped a little.
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