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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

I've taken the time to now re-wright my profile text. This is to everyone if you wouldn't mind giving me some feedback on what I've got and also on my pictures on how they can be improved

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By *0tt0nSu3Woman
over a year ago

London


"I've taken the time to now re-wright my profile text. This is to everyone if you wouldn't mind giving me some feedback on what I've got and also on my pictures on how they can be improved "

You will need to do some housekeeping before you take your photos. People DO notice a messy background.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

When I've got my own place soon then the pictures will hopefully improve

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By *0tt0nSu3Woman
over a year ago

London


"When I've got my own place soon then the pictures will hopefully improve "

I think you misunderstood me. I'm not talking about the state of your furniture. I'm talking about the things flung around it.

I also seem to remember that you have been told about this before.

I could say a lot more about this, but I won't.

I'm out.

Wishing all the best in your quest.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Near enough every single sentence begins with 'I' or 'I'm'. Now either this is bad English or you are coming across as selfish or self centered. Either way - not good.

Pictures: messy back ground major turn off.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

so many pics of the hairdo - probably straight after a trip to the barbers ???

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Are you a hair model? That's how it comes across, sorry. Also profile is hard reading as it seems like bullet points rather than free flowing

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

I have done some hair modelling for my mate yeah and they always end up being my better pictures as I'm shit at taking 'selfies'

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By *izzy.Woman
over a year ago

Stoke area


"Near enough every single sentence begins with 'I' or 'I'm'. Now either this is bad English or you are coming across as selfish or self centered. Either way - not good.

Pictures: messy back ground major turn off."

this

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