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By *haosmaster OP   Man
over a year ago

Cleethorpes

Had a few disparaging remarks about my profile these past few weeks.

Didn’t think it was that bad, kept it short-ish with a bit of light humour

Maybe the pics could be better?

I’m open to any constructive criticism or tips on how to improve it. If anybody would be kind enough to _iew it.

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By *iewMan
Forum Mod
over a year ago

Angus & Findhorn

Shag for England

I would change that

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

The first paragraph is awful. In my head you're saying all that stuff really fast and it sounds a bit desperate.

I didn't read the rest because that but put me off :/

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Had a few disparaging remarks about my profile these past few weeks.

Didn’t think it was that bad, kept it short-ish with a bit of light humour

Maybe the pics could be better?

I’m open to any constructive criticism or tips on how to improve it. If anybody would be kind enough to _iew it.

"

If it reflects you then nothing needs changing at all

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By *issy louWoman
over a year ago

Staffordshire Moorlands

The first paragraph is really garbled and needs a rewrite!

Pics not good at all, I'm sure that you can do better, we don't want to see yet another cock, and the last picture I would guess would not be attractive to any ladies at all, its not a pleasant _iew! Sorry

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By *ordonBennettMan
over a year ago

dover

Making claims of extravagant sexual prowess seems boastful and quite desperate and doesn't tell anybody about you as a person like a decent profile should.

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By *haosmaster OP   Man
over a year ago

Cleethorpes

Thank you for the constructive comments, it gives me something to think about.

Much appreciated

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By *oneythiefMan
over a year ago

Perthshire

I think your pics are fine mate. Shows what's on offer. Thought profile was ok considering some of the howlers I've read. I'd do you

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


" Making claims of extravagant sexual prowess seems boastful and quite desperate and doesn't tell anybody about you as a person like a decent profile should."

Totally agreed! What Is all that business about candy crush?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Start the profile from the bit that says 'im a single healthy guy' ......delete all the stuff above that, its not really breaking the ice, its more dating site banter.

I do understand what you mean, but there are so many guys on here looking for the same thing you need to make your profile better ( or as good) as the others.

good luck

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