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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Could anyone checkout my profile and give me some advice on attracting ladies and couples to it. Am brand new to all this. 3 weeks in and only managed to get profile verified today. any advice will be greatly appreciated.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Could anyone checkout my profile and give me some advice on attracting ladies and couples to it. Am brand new to all this. 3 weeks in and only managed to get profile verified today. any advice will be greatly appreciated. "

The substance and personality is better than many.

The presentation is awful. Use paragraphs. One great big block of text is unapproachable and, for goodness sake, improve your spelling and grammar.

Two of your photos should go as they don't show you in any discernable way.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Thanks, i tend to write as im thinking or saying the words. Not making excuses but being from belfast might just be the problem. Have to brush up on my grammer. I lived in St Mary,s st many years ago.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Just made a few changes. Could you just take a quick look over it again please?

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Twice i have tried to put my profile into paragraphs and its still coming up in a block. What am i doing wrong?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


" Twice i have tried to put my profile into paragraphs and its still coming up in a block. What am i doing wrong?"

No idea. Try using the return button?

Your profile text is a bit better but, and this is just personal, I prefer the use of proper sentences.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

just a glance at a block of text like that is enough to make me pass it by im afraid; it's impossible to read!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Commenting to hear suggestions

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I like your profile but agree it would read better in paragraphs.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Commenting to hear suggestions"

Start your own thread? It is not considered the done thing to hijack someone else's.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Thanks again, will try that and if i get no joy. i will delete and wright in again to the best of my ability You are not a teacher by any chance? lol Laughing at the question, could find myself in an awkward situation asking things like that.. Thanks again X

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Thank you for all the advice. Much appreciated, am going to rewrite (spell check) the profile. Again thanks X,X,X

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