FabSwingers.com forum: Have I gone a little OTT?

By *rontier Psychiatrist OP Man
over a year ago

Coventry

Hello everyone.

So I have decided to sort my profile out and start to put my self out here. Anyway I thought I would just give my brain free reign to write the description.

Is it a little OTO?

Do I need to reign in my over imaginative imagination?

As a profile is it any good?

John

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By *icecouple561Couple
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over a year ago

East Sussex

It starts off well but I stopped reading because it's too long for me, I think you're on the right track though your personality comes through and its clear that you're ready to enjoy life.

This is the pedant in me and it really doesn't matter but it's "definitely" not "defiantly"

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By *rontier Psychiatrist OP Man
over a year ago

Coventry

Not at all. Thanks for the spelling spot. I am unfortunately dyslexic and it does have a horrible habit of making a fool of me. It has now been corrected.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I'm never going to read a profile that long.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Not at all. Thanks for the spelling spot. I am unfortunately dyslexic and it does have a horrible habit of making a fool of me. It has now been corrected."

It is fine. You have only corrected one instance of "defiantly," though (and there are other mistakes). If you can't spot them, you can use a grammar/spelling checker or mention your dyslexia.

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By *reenEyedWifeCouple
over a year ago

Market Harborough

Honestly? Yes. It's too long. I'm a reader and a wordy girl myself, but it's even too long for me...

It's well written, and your pics are great, IMHO, you just need to chop the text down.

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By *xxxMan
over a year ago

Bedford & Chester

It certainly looks long but i didn't read it as I'm not your target audience. You do have me wondering about my own profile now though so fair play

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

i actually would read all of your profile if you sent me a respectful first message and i was interested in meeting you, so it's not too long for me.

it might be too long for other people but it's your profile and it makes a nice change to see a guy with a decent profile. a lot of it made smile and nearly laugh, i'm tired though and probably would've laughed otherwise.

pics are decent as well.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Hi,

I noticed you had no cock shots readily available.

You should upload lots of these as that is the key to getting the attention of these slutty slutbags.

TSH

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By *ady LickWoman
over a year ago

Northampton Somewhere

I think you cone across as a nice guy with a gsoh but for me the text is too long! You could get rid of 50% of that.

Good advice from TSH there

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"I think you cone across as a nice guy with a gsoh but for me the text is too long! You could get rid of 50% of that.

Good advice from TSH there

Thank you Lady Slut. I only give the very best advice.

TSH

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"I think you cone across as a nice guy with a gsoh but for me the text is too long! You could get rid of 50% of that.

Good advice from TSH there

I have given you some fabs for your slutty photos.

I like to see a slut who brings her own collar, I do hope you have the lead for it.

TSH

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I enjoyed reading your profile, made me laugh, especially the "silver surfer" part

However, imho, it does go on a bit too long. You sound like a really lovely guy, I'm sure you will do well on here, FM x

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By *ady LickWoman
over a year ago

Northampton Somewhere

"I think you cone across as a nice guy with a gsoh but for me the text is too long! You could get rid of 50% of that.

Good advice from TSH there

Thank you Lady Slut. I only give the very best advice.

TSH

He called me Lady Slut.....swooooooon

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By *ivemeyoursoulWoman
over a year ago

Easter just around the corner!

I'll read it when I have a bit more time

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I read almost all of your profile,if you had messaged me and were near enough for us to meet I would only have needed to skim read it. I think it's a good profile.

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By *rontier Psychiatrist OP Man
over a year ago

Coventry

OK. I have given it a little trim (the profile that is). Its still a fair bit of text but hopefully cut out some of the unnecessary bits.

How is it now?

Also what do people think of my photo's?

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

Made a nice change. You could spend time teaching your cat to read, then it wouldn't be stupid.

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By *rontier Psychiatrist OP Man
over a year ago

Coventry

Maybe but education isn't the same as intelligence. Anyone can read something but understanding it is another matter. If only I could find away to stop him ploughing through his 9 lives. He's already in minus figures. The vet is happy as my cat has probably funded a fair bit of his Porsche. Maybe I will start will a book on road safety.

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