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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Can someone or even a coupl of ppl go over my profile, and give me some creative criticism please, thank you

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By *ed wineMan
over a year ago

Where the streets have no name

Write something short, fun and clear about you and your preferences. Take brighter and closer (not only of your cock) pictures. And above all, be patiente.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Can someone or even a coupl of ppl go over my profile, and give me some creative criticism please, thank you "

Erm, your text currently is just a wink. Why do you want anyone to offer an opinion on that?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Can someone or even a coupl of ppl go over my profile, and give me some creative criticism please, thank you "

Write a profile and then ask for creative criticism again

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

There is nothing to critique other than a few dodgy cock shots..... What exactly do you want people to say?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

This has to be the most pointless critique my profile post ever

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

I have interests on there, so if people want to know what im into its called read, this wasnt pointless cause now i see i need character bio

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Great stuff! Keep it up, and message every woman within 40 miles "Hi wanna fuk" and attach dick pic. You'll be drowning in kludge presently

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

How about now, i added a profile text, and thats a bit crued foe me to say sorry

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Write something short, fun and clear about you and your preferences. Take brighter and closer (not only of your cock) pictures. And above all, be patiente."

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"How about now, i added a profile text, and thats a bit crued foe me to say sorry "

I don't mean to sound rude but is English your first language? Your profile text would be much better if spelled correctly and if it was written in sentences.

Having said that, the content is not particularly enticing, either. What are you trying to get across?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Someone should write the perfect profile so we can all say ' go and look at their profile.., that's how it's done'!

Or failing that someone write a Haynes manual

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

For a start take out the first three lines, not necessary and makes you sound like you're only doing it under duress. Then use sentences, please! Would be so much easier to read. Add in a bit more about what you are looking for and what you offer.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Someone should write the perfect profile so we can all say ' go and look at their profile.., that's how it's done'!

Or failing that someone write a Haynes manual "

You know what? Yours is damned good.

Perfect? Of course there is no perfect profile. There are many crap ones though.

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!


"Can someone or even a coupl of ppl go over my profile, and give me some creative criticism please, thank you "

Spelling mistakes, grammatical errors and poor sentence construction. Makes you look uneducated, stupid and lazy. I'm sure you're not, so make yourself look good.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

This is some good feedback, my first language is welsh, and i went to a welsh school, my speaking is much more impressive than my spelling, but thank you all

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Ok you can't accommodate and can't travel, and with a over 21 age restriction on most swing clubs you won't be able to get into those either. Not being funny, but surely there must be an easier way for young men of your age to get sex, than using a website geered towards a lifestyle people tend to adopt a bit later in life.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"This is some good feedback, my first language is welsh, and i went to a welsh school, my speaking is much more impressive than my spelling, but thank you all"

On here, your profile is what people see and judge you by. I am sure that spelling and grammar checks work in Wales.

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