FabSwingers.com forum: I cringe having to do this but.....

By *ncrath OP Man
over a year ago

Hull (ish)

Sorry folks ..... another pathetic

'Help me with my profile thread'

I've withheld doing this because I've seen several of these on here recently. Some with positive replies some shot down big time.

Okay. I'm babbling. ...

Getting nowhere fast on here. Drawing a blank most the time.

Gimme it straight about my profile.ill take it on the chin or blush but will make adjustments where necessary.

Thank for your time xx

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By *iewMan
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over a year ago

Angus & Findhorn

welcome

you start of a slight negative, I would spin that around and make it a positve

apart from that

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"welcome

you start of a slight negative, I would spin that around and make it a positve

apart from that

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yeah it starts on a bad tone...

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By *iewMan
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over a year ago

Angus & Findhorn

on a *

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Funny and catchy no cock pictures ok. But I am the straight male half!

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By *icecouple561Couple
Forum Mod
over a year ago

East Sussex

Hello

You say "Hello ladies" but say you will meet couples and the bit about biting is on every second profile I read.

Apart from that your pictures are nice, you have a smiling, good looking face picture and come across well. Good luck.

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By *ngeluk69Woman
over a year ago

Near enough

Lose the negative, focus on your positive points and you'll be fine

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By *abioMan
over a year ago

Newcastle and Gateshead

negativity breeds negativity.....

and negativity doesn't exactly scream fun........

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By *risky_MareWoman
over a year ago

...Up on the Downs

I like it fine - take more pics, better lighting if you can, hang around on the forums and you'll do fine im sure. Good luck x

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By *icketysplitsWoman
over a year ago

Way over Yonder, that's where I'm bound

Welcome.

I'd reiterate what the others have said. Maybe add a little creativity.

The ones that make me respond tend to have something slightly witty or the pictures are unusual.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Hello!!

-The profile starts off rather negatively. I like fun, witty men, so that would be a red flag.

-If you are just talking to ladies ("hi ladies") then we, as a couple, would not be as interested.

-You don't really say much about what you are looking for.

-Get rid of the biting thing....it is sooo overdone and not very clever anyway.

I like your pics. And I don't know what you are putting in your messages, but maybe that could be tweaked as well? I dunno.

Anyway, wish you the best of luck!

-Courtney

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By *ncrath OP Man
over a year ago

Hull (ish)

Thanks guys n gal's

Taken on board ! I'll have a re - write. Thanks for your opinions sincerely x

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By *icketysplitsWoman
over a year ago

Way over Yonder, that's where I'm bound

"Thanks guys n gal's

Taken on board ! I'll have a re - write. Thanks for your opinions sincerely x "

Keep joining in and see what happens.

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By *abioMan
over a year ago

Newcastle and Gateshead

having another read.... it doesn't actually say anything! its things that in your head may sound good... but doesn't really mean anything

okay.. so if you really think its is "8 billion to 1" against you (which is actually a rather cringy thing to say) why should people pick you as opposed to anyone else!!

give people a reason to think "wow!! i have to meet that person!" and saying you are an open book doesn't achieve that... the onus is as much on you to appeal to the reader as much as the reader does to you

what is there to entice people!

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By *icketysplitsWoman
over a year ago

Way over Yonder, that's where I'm bound

You could do what I did and get everyone here to write your profile for you.

It still has to be you and you need to own it so people would need to get to know you a bit.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I think it sounds nice.. .certainly not cringy. .. and lovely pics...

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Looks good to me as well

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

As a single female

I have to say . . . i carnt remember the last time I looked at a man in a Batman Onesie and thought to myself, hmmmmmm i need to do him !

Just saying lol

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By *ncrath OP Man
over a year ago

Hull (ish)

"As a single female

I have to say . . . i carnt remember the last time I looked at a man in a Batman Onesie and thought to myself, hmmmmmm i need to do him !

Just saying lol

Haha ... fair comment miss .noted x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"As a single female

I have to say . . . i carnt remember the last time I looked at a man in a Batman Onesie and thought to myself, hmmmmmm i need to do him !

Just saying lol

I would definitely do him in a batman onesie

I'd insist he kept it on and used a growley voice

haha x

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By *ncrath OP Man
over a year ago

Hull (ish)

"As a single female

I have to say . . . i carnt remember the last time I looked at a man in a Batman Onesie and thought to myself, hmmmmmm i need to do him !

Just saying lol

I would definitely do him in a batman onesie

I'd insist he kept it on and used a growley voice

haha x"

I'll be round in 5 kitty !!

To the batmobile! ! Lol

(Gruffly said of course )

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"As a single female

I have to say . . . i carnt remember the last time I looked at a man in a Batman Onesie and thought to myself, hmmmmmm i need to do him !

Just saying lol

I would definitely do him in a batman onesie

I'd insist he kept it on and used a growley voice

haha x"

Te he, I hadnt thought of that lol

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By *trawberry-popWoman
over a year ago

South East Midlands NOT

I like your profile OP. You're an attractive guy.

I'd maybe add in a bit about what you can offer and the sort of people you'd like to meet, otherwise I think it's fine.

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By *ause and EffectCouple
over a year ago

Southampton

An ok profile overall - the pics are good too... another fan of the Onesie here (something I honestly never thought I'd say on fabs!)

The crash and burn bit made me wince - and we all know there are trillions of men here so it doesn't really add anything. Maybe a bit about what you can offer / do like?

It's all finessing though so nothing major to worry about!! Tx

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By *at69driveMan
over a year ago

Hertford

"Sorry folks ..... another pathetic

'Help me with my profile thread'

I've withheld doing this because I've seen several of these on here recently. Some with positive replies some shot down big time.

Okay. I'm babbling. ...

Getting nowhere fast on here. Drawing a blank most the time.

Gimme it straight about my profile.ill take it on the chin or blush but will make adjustments where necessary.

Thank for your time xx "
. Your pictures seem fine and you have a good face picture .

However while you have quite a few lines in your profile , it does not really tell members anything about you . Do you have hobbies and interests and if so what are they?. What are your key selling points . There is a lot of competition on fab and a profile has to stand out just to get to the starting line . Even then it is an uphill struggle

Good luck.

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By *issy louWoman
over a year ago

Staffordshire Moorlands

Yayyyyy....well done on no cock pics!!!

But please lose the 'I don't bite....' line, it's certainly not original, every other profile has it! Lol! (And yes, ok, thats an exaggeration, but so is 8 billion to one!)

Good luck

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

The shy bit would put me off.... Perhaps better to mention after exchanging a few messages that you may feel a bit nervous/any on the first meet but will soon warm up! No need on profile

Agree with everyone re the bite comment being a cliche

Nice pics although the middle one with the hood up doesn't do it for me

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By *ophieslutTV/TS
over a year ago

Central

Largely it's not saying anything about you. It's got stuff about fab, others, stats and mentions shyness. It needs more statements that define you. And largely make it a positive profile, as it creates a better feeling for others.

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By *ncrath OP Man
over a year ago

Hull (ish)

Thanks guys and girls.

I left this to roll over the weekend to see what comments came in . Thanks for the feedback.

And I guess back to the drawing board.

Totally appreciate all your comments many thanks x

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