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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Hello

Just thought I'd ask for some advice on my profile to see if it needs improving.

I came back over a month ago and tried to remember what I had on profile so I put on what I could.

Have a look and if it does need some improving, let me know ok

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Nice pics.

Cut the text down to two paragraphs. I lost interest quickly but that's cos I like a bit of wit myself.

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By *aeriequeenWoman
over a year ago

Manchester

Good variety of pics but maybe not with socks on!

Profile is quite wordy so maybe say what you mean in a more concise way.

No point saying 'for those that haven't heard of me' Most people wont have I imagine..

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By *ig Ted 66Man
over a year ago

Bedworth

I think you may well be questioned as to why you only appear to have your freedom during the day? - why not at night ?!

Guess you'll either need to have a pretty convincing reason, or may be best to omit from the profile?

Just saying....

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

I get what you mean about my profile being a bit wordy which I apologize. I could try and shorten them I suppose.

I had to put the whole living at home paragraph because I didn't want to be tarnished as someone playing away. As for not going out at night, living at home makes that difficult unless I'm staying at Blackpool for the night which is only on occasion.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Ok I've given the profile a bit of a trim. How does it look?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Ok I've given the profile a bit of a trim. How does it look?"

Do something about the state of your wallpaper and please get rid of the photo of you in your socks.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Ok I've given the profile a bit of a trim. How does it look?

Do something about the state of your wallpaper and please get rid of the photo of you in your socks."

Done and dusted. I do apologize about the ones with wallpaper. I guess I could do some new ones I suppose

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By *ordonBennettMan
over a year ago

dover

The throwaway phrase towards the end "while I'm being honest" does imply that honesty isn't a permanent state or trait....

I'd get rid of it as it doesn't add anything.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"The throwaway phrase towards the end "while I'm being honest" does imply that honesty isn't a permanent state or trait....

I'd get rid of it as it doesn't add anything."

Good point

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