FabSwingers.com forum: changed my profile

By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

I've changed my profile text is it any better or worse i do still need some more pictures up which are on there way

By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Have you read it through a couple of times.

I had a little difficulty as I felt that in some places, a full stop would have helped and in others it felt like you finished a sentence halfway through.

You might think i'm being picky here, but spelling, grammar and punctuation can make a massive difference.

If a visitor finds your profile difficult to read or understand then you could find yourself missing out.

Your profile is your shop window. You get just one chance to make a first impression.

By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"I've changed my profile text is it any better or worse i do still need some more pictures up which are on there way "

Very confusing and says very little. It is an ignore from us.