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so does this type of profile work?

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

... just looking for some feedback. I have tried to create a profile that is accurate, but also different from the rest that you find on here.

I'm not looking for you to be into the same things as me, just some feedback on what I've written, if possible please?

Thanks.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

As a straightforward profile, it doesn't say much about what you're actually looking for ... as a piece of prose, I loved it!!

PS

Ever thought of writing a book?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I really enjoyed the read. Sounds more like baring the soul than baggin' off though xx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

yes i enjoyed your profile

i wouldnt respond to it though - is that the question you were asking?

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By *imnher2Woman
over a year ago

watford

also enjoyed the read.. but maybe say what your looking for

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I think what he is looking for would be clear to the type of peep he his looking for and the profile obviously works, since he has had two meets.

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By *ruitWoman
over a year ago

near kings lynn

Well written profile and shows your personality, well done for putting in the effort.

Add in what your looking to meet although it shows from your verfications.

Well done hunny, good luck xx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"... just looking for some feedback. I have tried to create a profile that is accurate, but also different from the rest that you find on here.

I'm not looking for you to be into the same things as me, just some feedback on what I've written, if possible please?

Thanks.

"

Your profile is well written and interesting but fails on a very important level - there's no real pointed as to what you are looking for.

As to being different from the rest, well, lets guess there's 10,000 profiles on the site - you'll never be different to the rest, just hope to be better than the majority.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

PS photos are good to have.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I loved it!!!

I wish you well!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

We like it...

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By *harpDressed ManMan
over a year ago

Here occasionally, but mostly somewhere else


"also enjoyed the read.. but maybe say what your looking for"

Isn't it a well written way of saying that what he's looking for is "anything"?

(This is not a criticism)

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By *lare GTV/TS
over a year ago

South of Sleaford

A well written profile.

I also agree the writer is not sure what he are looking for.

He is honest and open, that is refreshing.

Clare.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I love it. I'm a fan of the interesting and obscure profile myself

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

was gonna answer but to be honest aint finished reading profile yet

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

many thanks for all your comments; seems there is still work to be done to make the profile more clear to illustrate what I am looking for.

Which is not 'anything' ... lol

I am a bi male that has no prejudice on sex or sexuality. If two or more people enjoy and activity together, then there is nobody who can say that it is wrong.I enjoy all company, with a particular leaning towards tgirls.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I enjoyed reading your profile too. Perhaps adding some torso/body pics may help to drum up interest.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

lovely piece of writing dude but more akin to a dating site than a recreational sex site.

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By *histler21Man
over a year ago

Ipswich

When I scan a profile - I jump straight to the "Looking For" section. When I find that I'm excluded, I don't have to worry about reading the rest of the profile.

Personally, I think it is way too long.

In general, I prefer something much more succinct. If I'm interested - I'll ask...then you can go into a bit more detail for me.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

yeah, I thought about that, but then previous experience makes me want to just put it all down to be read, so I don't have to keep repeating myself to people who are not serious... although I take your point... revision 3, me-thinks coming swiftly on....

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By *averiMan
over a year ago

Swindon to bristol

great profile.....and for someone who states they are not looking for single guys you did very well to get two verifications from them!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I like what you've written, but without any photos at all we probably wouldn't contact you, there seem to be a lot of profiles, even the couples ones, with no pictures of the guys on them, in our case that puts Lisa off straight away and if the guy happens to be Bi so that i might be interested as well it makes me move on to the next profile.

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